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Chapter 8
18 reviewsPlots, plans and other skulduggery. Albie shows that he ain't as bright and shiny as people would want.
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JEDI POTTER
(#) twilliams1797 2010-05-15
As always, I enjoy your work.
I was considering Harry's creation of the emitter jewels, and I had this sudden vision of Neville doing this task, making two, and creating the double end lightsaber of Darth Maul..
Neville strikes me as the kind of guy who could handle such a tool, or even a quarterstaff.
As always, great chapter, quite interesting.
TimWAuthor's response
Thanks, Tim. Givem your experience with Fanfuic that is especially cool to me.
Thanks for the nod to the focusing crystals. I worked hard at making them, as I am more than familiar with both crystal and gaseous lasers. I've seen what can happen if you use a flawed crystal. Each has to be absolutely perfect to be of any use.
Now the problem is that he has less that one year to train, he needs sixty lightsabers, and each crystal takes five days to produce. E-mail me with your guess of how he's gonna do it.
While I agree that Neville would be a good choice for a Lightstaff, the only reason I will not have him using one is because of the amount of time they have. Harry has less that one year to teach his crew Shii-Cho, Makashi, Soresu and Ataru. However as you've seen, I will include Neville in a closer friendship than Ron, (who I believe never should have been given the job). I will not be bashing Ron, nor will I relegate him to the outfield, though he will play a lesser role, and while he will be jealous, he will be made to understand that Neville is more deserving of his spot. I've already set the stage for his pairing.
Dave
Given, and Fanfic.JEDI POTTER
(#) siledubhghlase 2010-05-18
Okay, I have to admit that I'm not much for crossover fics, but this one is wonderful! It's actually believable. ROCK ON!Author's response
Thanks you. I'm glad you like it. It's difficult to write a piece like this and keep it believable. I've seen so many crossovers get completely out of hand.
Rockin'...Aye Aye, Sir!
Alkorin
(Sorry!)
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) WBH21C 2010-05-22
Great part! Love to see what happens with the queen.Author's response
She ain't gonna be happy. As I understand it, she insists on the truth, be it good or bad. Dumbley has been lying to her for a long time now and she's just learning about it from one of her nobles...one she never knew existed.
On a side note; Queen Elizabeth is one of the very few governors I actually respect. She is not perfect, but she is dedicated to the good of her people. She has faced the very same dangers as her people, dangers of a horrific nature, in the line of duty, (In WWII, she was in the streets with the rest of her people, working as a truck mechanic, instead of partying in another country (like the prince of Kuwait did during Gulf War, episode 1))
She has governed as fairly and equably as any monarch has, and a lot better than most, She even relegated her own position to that of figurehead, because that was what was best for Britain.
That's a queen.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) XRaiderV1 2010-05-22
another excellent chapter.
well executed switching of the sword.Author's response
Thank you.
Glad you liked the 'Great Undetected Sword-Snatch'. Snicker!
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) sargentaaron2004 2010-05-25
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! I reached the end of present content!!!!
Update soon!Author's response
Don't worry. There's more coming.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) goku90504 2011-12-24
ch8 typo
Dumbledore does not now where The Quibbler is printed.
know
note i would have sent this via a pm but your pm is turned offAuthor's response
Hello again, goku.
Dumbledore has made a series of bad mistakes. That’s just one of them.
Sorry, it’s not just my PM, it’s the internet entirely. When I have money, I’ll get it back up again.
AlorkinJEDI POTTER
(#) Staryfury0901 2018-10-20
Did you perhaps forget to mention you borrowed a line from Judge Dread? " I am the law! " That line is kind' of like the line from Dirty Harry " Go ahead punk! Make my day! "JEDI POTTER
(#) Staryfury0901 2020-06-14
I can't help wondering what such a gem would be worth. After all, that doesn't happen in nature and even now nobody can make one like it using todays tech!
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