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Hold your breath, kid!
(#) insert_name_here 2010-12-27
I like this... Please write more! ((But don't turn it into a frerard. I don't mind if it's waycest, or frikey, or fraycest, just not frerard.)) XD
MikeyAuthor's response
OMG wow you know whats really funny me and my mom were discussing band names and i came up with insert name here XD haha lol thats funny and random lol
like the name hehe
and no way man, i have already done like 16 chapters of this in frerard fuck.
i could make another story that is frikey, cuz i really do like frikey, just get back to me if you want and i'll do ya a frikey, however ya want :) if it helps xD lolHold your breath, kid!
(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-27
Thumbs up
Not often I read a story that captures my interest in the first chapter, it usually takes the second or third to fully contaminate me. However, this fic is different. Perhaps delve into detail a little more, and if this is a Frerard, I think I'm going to enjoy it.
Hope you update soon.
Good job.
xoxox
-Frankie.Author's response
Hey aww thanks thats really nice and i have got a lot better and have done more detail and stuff :) i have done 16 more chapters i just want to know what people think so thanks again and i will post the next chapters when i get hope :) xxHold your breath, kid!
(#) emo-girl 2010-12-28
i love this one its swwweeeetttt!!!! god i told you ages ago to put it up on here and now you take your sweet ass time to put it on here don't you? god sometimes i just wonder why im getting married to you... jokes love ya really!
anyway i love this one when they were younger. i love it how frankie cant say gee's name SUPER SWEET!!!! reminds me of my cousin trying to say my name emiwee instead and then stupid as a nickname, i think he gives everyone stupid as a nickname.... i love him though..
anyway more soon woman or i shall not teach you my amazing writing skills... :PAuthor's response
God u are so cheeky but yes you are right i do have a sweet ass but u won't get any of it on our honeymoon if you carry on with that lip XD lol
Anyway thank u for reading my chapter again at leatse ya a little bit sweet :) lol
And lol thanks its funny my bro calls ya elimy lol he is a spacka afterall anyway XD hmmm i'm pretty sure he only calls u stupid :D hehe
And what writing skills anyway ? XDHold your breath, kid!
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-01-12
oh my god! i read the first couple of chapters of this on fanfiction. net ages ago and loved it! :D but then i couldn't find it again cus i don't have a fanfiction.net account :( soooo happy you're posting it here! :D
lucy xoAuthor's response
awww you like it thanks :)
but i never posted it on fanfiction.net lol on livejournal i do >.< but thats all u must have got confussed with another one or the site.
Anyway, i'm really glad u like it, tere will be more soon :) xxHold your breath, kid!
(#) Truthchild8 2011-01-13
please don't be mad at me! but i know that this isn't your first because
i have read this one before on livejournal. same title and everything....
-S.DAuthor's response
Yeah i have just decided to post it on here, though it is still my first story :)
how much have you read of it?Hold your breath, kid!
(#) Truthchild8 2011-01-15
all that was left on livejournal I liked was sad though :(Author's response
well i have got 18 chapters on their, i wouldn't say its that sad tho, i havn't finished it yet anyway :)Hold your breath, kid!
(#) Truthchild8 2011-01-16
parts of it is kindaAuthor's response
oh yeah true :) i really hope you like it anyway.
I'm trying to figure out how to end this for LJ lol and then trying to re-write them a lil, making it better and posting it on here :)Hold your breath, kid!
(#) PatrickIsTheSex 2011-03-06
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Linda, You Little Whore.
LOL.
Aww, I felt sorry for frankie! Nasty Gee!
Yeah..FORGETS his blanket, lol.
I've read this before, like the other week but I couldt be bothers to review cause I'm lazy and I hate you.
Joke.
It's actually because I'm a spazzing chicken head all the time who can't write or sleep.
Cause I'm too busy -winkwink- joke joke, frank is not tied up to my bed... Mikey is . Heh.Author's response
haha lol she is XD
yeah well things will look up :D
lol anyway thanks for reviewing and being so kind to me not jk
you love me really you can't deny XD
thanks so much :/ lol well at least you have reviewd now XD
haha you have the spazzy chicken thing right
yeah thats right i'm with frankie lol
look now time for you to go to sleep now school tomoz you need more time to sleep
xx coz
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