Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Hold your breath, kid!
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Hold your breath, kid!
(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2011-01-01
Eagerly shakes leg
You're going to need to update soon, because you see this? Points to shaking leg
This is what happens when I get excited for something.
This, continues pointing to leg will remain shaking until I see an update. Do you know what annoying that is going to be for everyone I come into contact with?
To save the annoyance of many human beings, and my poor poor leg, please update soon!
This chapter held emotion and truth.
The teddy bear was an important key really.
It's got me interested for more, so please, update asap.
xoxox
-Frankie.Author's response
laughing on the floor so hard my insides drop out crap
lmao XD
you mademe laugh hehe
and i'm so happy that you like it this much, and boy if you like these cruddy two chapters you will like the rest, well i'm hoping anyway >.<
i jusy really want to get more reviews thats maybe why i'm not posting so much haha i'm mean i know
but just for you (and your leg) xD i will post the next chapter now :)
xxHold your breath, kid!
(#) emo-girl 2011-01-02
i love it woman!
i just love them as kids!
more soon or else!Author's response
thank you thank you thank youu :)
xx cozHold your breath, kid!
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-01-02
haha thanks :)
and i do have more, i have posted chapter 3, tell me what you think :)
btw i love your name >.Hold your breath, kid!
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-03-05
hehehe awesome chapter :) i feel sorry for little Frankie and Gee at the start though...so cute! xD okay, i'm basically gunna read and review all the chapters now lol
i think you portrayed them really well as kids- a lot of writers dont do that :/ but i think you did :) can't wait to read more!
CosmicZombie xo
p.s. dont know if you're still reading it, but i updated "you'll never fit in much, kid" yesterday, and i'm gunna update again in a few hours xD if your interested n my crazed ramblings.. but, yeah, i'll shut up and go read now...and i'll try not to give such long reviews
each time haha!Author's response
awww wow thank you sooo sooo much that is purely one of the nicest things ever, i am over the moon you think that :)
hehe sorry it gets better :) i hope lol
thank you thank you thank you!!!!
i reallllyy love your reviews really :D
they are soo nice and make me wanna carry on so thank you soo much
SOOOOOO glad your reading
and of course i love your story, i think i revied it :) will check it. It really is great :D and no the longer the better, however you want to review them :D
the more longer there are shows me that you really like my story and thats really nice :D
XXX cozHold your breath, kid!
(#) yourtoocoolforschool 2011-03-06
it's amazing with a little twist of irony. even though this never happened to iero's and the way's parents its a good fan fiction and its drags all the my chemical romance, ferard lovers as well, good job (:Author's response
aww thank you soo much :) i'm really blessed lol
hmmm yes thanks more will be on it's way very soon :) so glad your reading i really hope you read some more
xx coz
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