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Luck
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-05-16
Nice twist, it was cool to read something origanal. Much better than anything ive writen or probebly will write.Author's response
Don't be so harsh on yourself. I've been writing for a long time, and I think I could still use some work. It takes patience, but once you start picking out what you write best, you get better at it.
Thanks for the originality bit! Then again, we're still a fairly new community (so far as I know), so I guess there's still a fair amount of stuff that hasn't been covered.Luck
(#) Frimmy 2006-05-16
wow. that was really well written, although the begining could get a bit confusing, what with the two girls that the readers don't know.
the idea itself is great. i always new neil would probable be changed by the group..and the whole luck thing? amazing. congratulations.Author's response
Yeah... I considered doing it from New-Neil PoV, but I wasn't certain just how to do it without ruining the ending. So we have the girls instead... :) Thanks! I had fun with this.
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