(#) shadow_divinexxxxx 2006-05-26Well done so far. Funny. usually I read higher rated fics (R->NC-17) but your story is at the moment a favorite. If you do plan on making it Harry/Multi or Harry/Harem, leave out hermoine and Ginny. There is just too many fics with those two. Will there be erotica scenes? More fights? keep making it funny.
- Wow, this is really funny!
And the part that Harry start imitating the well (and only) know exit of 'Right Said Fred' was simple hilaryous! i was laughing for hours! xD
and, it's really cool the way you're trying to put your story into the "canon" story, you know? i liked a lot that... and a lot of detail's i've missed in this review, but anyway... god story, i hope you can continue it soon :)
Thanks for share it
PD: And Dyas sound almost like "días", the spanish for "days" you know? ;)
- After reading the last two chapters, i've noticed a couple things, and there's something I feel should be addressed. Harry has his pimp gear, and his pimp cane, he even has him pimp game tight; I'm thinking it's time to find out how strong his pimp hand is. I think 'Dear Draco' would make the perfect test subject. You know, give him something to actually bitch about.
- I do understand that Umbridge could be mistaken for a female but never a woman. And should Harry deposit it with the Death Eater men folk, well, desperation has been known to drive people to do things they otherwise wouldn't. I mean, having been in the Chamber long enough, even Umbridge might be mistaken for a female.
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