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Chapter Two
19 reviewsPersistant brothers, evil stepsisters, and the important difference between korma and karma...(EDITED- sorry guys, i noticed there were some mistakes..I've hopefully edited them all out now)..
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) andreajp 2011-05-21
If that who I believe it is, things could get a little awkward lol.
Looking forward to the next chapter.Author's response
yes, I think they could...xD
I'll update as soon as I can, and thanks for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) MCRmyAlways 2011-05-21
I loved this chapter! You are a really great writer. Looking forward to your next post.Author's response
aww, thank you! glad you liked it! :D
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-05-21
omg need need need to know whats going to happen pwease i have cookies lol updata when you can
xoxoAuthor's response
mmm, cookies! ^^ thanks for reviewing, I'll hopefully update in a new few days :)
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) sushiipodrocks 2011-05-21
Just wow! I love your writing! Cannot wait for the next chapter. XoxoxoAuthor's response
thank yoooou :D means a lot :)
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) Broken_Feathers 2011-05-21
omgee omgee omgee omgeeeeee i NEEEDDD to no MOREEEE i llloooovvveee this and ALL your other stories hey wait is this a frerard??? i HOPE it is :DAuthor's response
yeah, this is a frerard xD thank yooooooou so much :D means a lot you like my stories! ^^
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) kirrahdiviney 2011-05-22
hahahahahahhahaha, two things made me laugh so much i cried;
1. “Gerard?!”
“Frank.”
LOL
2. "Secondly, have either of you seen my pink nail polish?”
“Yeah, I borrowed it.” BAHAHAHAHA YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! AND THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER! update soon :) xAuthor's response
haha, glad you liked it! awww, thank yooooou! :D you've made me all smiley xD thank you so much for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) serialegocrusher 2011-05-22
GAWD, I'm loving this story more and more every minute. It's cute, and funny; not funny, hilarious. And ooooh, I can't wait for the frerardness to begin, I know it's gonna be good :3"Be My Detonator."
(#) UndergroundCinnamon 2011-05-22
This chapter made me laugh so much! really, I was trying to keep from falling off the bed with laughter, tears coming out of my eyes.
You're a really good writer; your stories always make me smile :) update soon!
xx"Be My Detonator."
(#) jadesohma 2011-05-22
AHHHHHH! WHAT A BITCH! SHE DOESN'T DESURVE FRANKIE! Grrr. O.o dude this is like cinderella! AHHH! 'Cause you know how the pink one is really nice and feels bad for cinderella it's just that one bitch?! Accept they're all pretty O.o ANYWAY! I loved it:) UPDATE SOONER PLEASE!"Be My Detonator."
(#) TheBambooMuncher 2011-05-22
FUCK THAT COCK SUCKING WHORE!!!!!! IT SHOULD BE GERARD HE'S AFTER! ahem We need more! Write. It. Up. Now!
^_^ teehee -End Transmission-
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