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Chapter Two
19 reviewsPersistant brothers, evil stepsisters, and the important difference between korma and karma...(EDITED- sorry guys, i noticed there were some mistakes..I've hopefully edited them all out now)..
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) perfectzombie 2011-05-22
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL OMFG GKJAFGALFDKVVAGKJFVVVHEGBREHEYFHJSFNWOAZSNGNUDS im sorry but i love your writing too much nerd boner ...(im not a complete weirdo btw. nerd boner is a frank quote trololol) anywaaay please update soon :( i cant survive without your fanfic!"Be My Detonator."
(#) xxKilljoysxx 2011-05-22
That bitch! Why would Frankie go out with her!? This is really good! Update soon bub(: xx"Be My Detonator."
(#) ShannonThePirate 2011-05-26
I'm just after reading both of these chapters now... They were AWESOME! you have to update soon or i think i'll die D: lol your such an awesome author ^^
xøxø"Be My Detonator."
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-05-31
OMFG can this get even more perfect i really dont know what to say, your writing is tooo good XD lol
i love it.
I can tell i will be a lil more than obssessed with this story lol XD
cant wait untill you update.
“Hmm…possibilities.” Mikey grins. “Na, don’t listen to her, Gee- don’t let her get to you. One day she’ll get eaten by hungry moosi like she deserves. Korma, y’know?”
“KARMA, Mikes, not korma!” I snort. “Korma is a kind of curry.”
this made me lol seriously, not many stories do but this did. SOO CUTE. i LOVE how you portrayed mikey in this awww.
and jamie is a bitch, what she said to gerard was really mean :(
lol
tho gerard told her XD hehe
I scowl angrily at her. “Jamie. Trust me, it’ll take a lot more than pink nail polish to make you look even halfway more human and less bitch. I think a plastic surgeon might work better.”
lol i say that to the plastic girls at school hehe
love love love love it :)
and if gerard gets upset i think someone can make it better lol wink wink
hehe cant wait for more
chazom
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) TiaJade 2011-06-03
If you dont update soon im gonna go mad i tell you MAD!Author's response
don't worry, i'm hopefully gunna update tomorrow :) thanks for reviewing!
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) Broken_Feathers 2011-06-04
not to bother you but when will you update??? please update soon!! :D"Be My Detonator."
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-09-27
WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNKKKKKKKKKKKIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
Eugh, why did frankie-wankie go out with such a fucking whore? >:( I love this already, I think you already know that you're one of my fave writers on here. :)
SF xx"Be My Detonator."
(#) -Dead 2012-07-28
The korma thing amused me way too much and I completely adore Mikey...and the whole story, of courseAuthor's response
Ahaaha, thank you :D
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