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• The Things You Never Told Me

  (#) UndergroundCinnamon 2011-06-13

  hey! I'm really enjoying it so far, and for some reason I literally fell in love with this sentence: /As he looked outside at the bare trees getting drenched by the icy downpour the single tear dripping off his chin onto his lap became two, then three, and soon they were pouring down like the midnight rain pounding on the bedroom window./. I found it really beautiful :). Other than that, for the whole frerard thingy, I actually don't know. I mean, I'm a total frerard fangirl, but for some reason I see this story more about friendship than love...I dunno...I'd bring Frank in but maybe just as a really really good friend. I dunno, it's your story, so you decide XD.
  xx, a.
  oh, and one really random piece of info: I'd love a misfits shirt too XD

  Author's response

  Thank you!!! This really means a lot to me. And yeah for the Frerard thing I was thinking more like a best friends thing too

• The Things You Never Told Me

  (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-06-13

  i agree with the above, this should be more about friendship and what not. this was a really moving chapter. it might help to have a time skip to starting the new term at school (not immediately but i'm sure you don't want to narrate every day of winter vacation ) i love this :) update soon.

  Author's response

  Thank you! That was what I was planning to do. I didnt think you'd want to read through every day of their vacation haha

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