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The Bloody Man of Čachtice
(#) afabulouskilljoy 2011-08-14
Okay, this is meant to be constructive!!
Linda would a seamstress, not sewer. I thought a sewer, spelt that was, was a waste facility :L
Very good! Don't worry to much about how they talk.. as long as you don't use obviously modern words like "dude" I'm sure you'll come across just fine!
xoAuthor's response
oh shit! I didn't pay attention to that...English isn't really my first language so I kinda mix up words sometimes :L I'll fix it. thanks for pointing it out(:The Bloody Man of Čachtice
(#) Snake_Tongue 2011-08-14
I really lIke it! I am quite interested in this time period so when i saw this was a frerard i was Luke jumping for joy! Please continue! ;)The Bloody Man of Čachtice
(#) Lizzeh 2011-08-14
WOO this is really great so far :D
i'm so excited for the next chapter, fuck yea medieval frerard.The Bloody Man of Čachtice
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-08-14
Really good. Can't wait for more.
And don't stress with the dialogue, just don't use modern day words like 'babe' :)Author's response
Thank you :)
and haha I'm sure I won't :LThe Bloody Man of Čachtice
(#) TheOnlyLovedOne 2011-08-14
Wow this is really interesting but im sure you can pull it off! update soon :)The Bloody Man of Čachtice
(#) DisenchantedDestroya 2011-08-18
Sounds really interesting can't wait for the next update :D
-DD XO
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