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• Light(e)ning

  (#) Frimmy 2006-06-07

  well, much as i'd love to flame you for the intro paragraph you gave, i can't, because there's nothing much to flame really. except it's hard to tell whose speaking at times. and the transition between jokingly/playful to romantic/serious is a little fast.
  asides from that, it was pretty good. keep writing!

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  (#) Elsask 2006-06-07

  i thought it was really good, keep on writing!

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  (#) Arisey 2006-06-07

  It was really good! I agree a bit with Frimy, though, it was kind of hard to see who was talking.

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  (#) StinkFace 2006-06-08

  Awww, so cute. I liked it. Very good. Keep up the work.

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  (#) Life-is-Pain 2006-06-09

  Thank you for the reviews, and I shall try to write more, though at the moment exams are driving me mad. An extra bit of thanks to Frimmy, I see those faults now, and will try to fix it in any other writing I do. As for heather, if you register, you can post your story on this site.

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  (#) caity_party_princess 2006-06-10

  That was cute

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  (#) princessofoyownworld 2006-06-11

  Good Job! I really enjoyed it!

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  (#) crazy_reviewer 2006-07-05

  Very nice! my crickets and I love Lightning, so this story was very much appreciated!
  crickets take the keyboard
  its true we do love lightning!

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