(#) torosaurusLOVE 2006-06-11this reminded me of learning to trust... You know except for it was her brother, not her boyfriend. And how did she know the guys? And why was her brother at petsmart? I couldn't take the whole last part seriously because first it was mike with the spagetti strainer, and i couldn't stop laughing, and then with the frying pan and the whole "whose the bitch now?" type of thing... I just couldn't get into the intesity because of that. And also, 8 guys were scared of one? c'mon now... It was okay, but there are things you could've improved on.
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-06-17Wow! I just read this now! Cause FicWad's stories are all over the place, I've been clicking on random page numbers and came across part1 and decided to read the rest! I am so glad I picked that number cause that rocked bigtime!!!
I love how you included Green Day in this! They're my 2nd fave band right after MCR!!!
I actually laughed at several different parts of this! Like where Tre` says 'I knew this frying pan would come in handy!' LMAO! So funny! And how Mike had a spaghetti strainer! Lol, I had mental images of Gee looking really bad-ass with a huge knife, Tre` looking like an old housewife with a frying pan held at the ready and a close up of Mike's face really dark with (M) shadows on his face, then it zooms out to his shoulders where you can see the top of this shiny metal thing, then it zooms out even more to a spaghetti strainer! ROFL! I 'm still laughing now!!! :D
I seriously loved this! And is your username zackyvfan cause of Zacky Vengeance from Avenged Sevenfold? I'm not a fan or anything, but I know that there's also M Shadows (like my lame non-funny joke above) and Synyster Gates (so cool names!)
Great story!!! I loved it!!!
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