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Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) dropthedaggerlaura 2011-12-16
This is my absolute favorite story currently!!!Author's response
Aww, thank you very much! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-16
This chapter was great. I love your layout. You have some dialogue and then you have what's going through Gerards mind. I really like that. This is a fantastic story. And I can't stop reading it. Keep on updating!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm very glad that you liked it! I'm relieved that you liked the layout, I was kinda worried it was dragged out/boring/confusing.
I'll probably update on either Sunday or Monday because I'm being forced to go to some London party tonight.
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review; it really does mean a lot! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-16
again, very sad. But I truly do love this story! and you put up a new chapter almost everyday-that takes dedication my friend. Is mikey gonna talk again soon? I hope so. I'm not exactly sure why, but yeah. Please update soon!Author's response
Sorry that it was sad; I really will try to male future chapters brighter!
I'll probably update on either Sunday or Monday because I am being forced to trek to London for some party today/tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-16
Yeah... I guess I have stayed with you this whole journey... AWESOME!!! We're story buddies!!! :D :D :D I love Frank, but why you no make better!?!? >:o And Mikey been through shit. Gerard... I don't know where I'd place him right now. I'm still pissed about what Frank did. I mean, c'mon! Gerard or Mikey, Frank. Either way, you're going to break someone's heart. And that's why I'm a little pissed at you. Not you; Frank. Still. UPDATE SOON! You know I'll read it.Author's response
Heya, story buddy! ;)
Frank deffinitely has a lot of shit to sort out, doesn't he?
I'll update either Sunday or Monday due to being dragged to London today.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to review; it really does help me to write! :)
Heya, story buddy! ;)
Frank deffinitely has a lot of shit to sort out, doesn't he?
I'll update either Sunday or Monday due to being dragged to London today.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to review; it really does help me to write! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) MCRmilify 2011-12-16
I just want to run around my house screaming right now.
I can't even process all of this.
I haven't read since November because of mid-terms and family shit and now it's just all hitting my like a brick to the face.
I think I love it but I'm not sure because I'm so sad/angry/REALLYFUCKINGSAD/scared.
I'll leave a coherent review when I'm done staring at my ceiling contemplating life.Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) MCRmilify 2011-12-16
Okay I think I'm half-sane again. Um.
This story is amazingly awesome and I'm not good enough with words to describe everything accurately...
I love your writing SO much
You could be writing about somebody eating bread and it would be entertaining.
Everything is so detailed and vivid and I love it :]
Oh and the storyline/plot-thing is tear-jerking and painful to read and beautifully sick and at times cute in a twisted way.
I just want to hug Mikey so badly and tell him how loved he is and UGH
And then I want to slap Frank for not being able to decide who he loves even though I can't decide who he loves and I'm really happy that Gerard's getting his shit together but I know it's all going to fly out of place when he finds out Frank and Mikey kissed and sometimes I have to remind myself this is just a story and I shouldn't worry this much over it.
uh
just
please update before I think myself to deathAuthor's response
Thank you very, very much; I think your review just absolutely made my day! I'm really glad that you liked it as I wasn't too sure if it was halfway decent or not.
Please don't worry about this too much ;)
I'll probably update either Sunday or Monday.
Thank SOOOOO much for taking the time to leave such a lovely, uplifting review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) KilJoy101 2011-12-17
This is an amazing story and is presently my favourite! keep updating, I can't wait for the next chapter!! ExoxAuthor's response
Aww, thank you very much; you've made me smile! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-17
This is unbelievable!! In a good way, of course. The best way. I love your writing, and I would love to help you, but I have no clue as to how you could improve. I mean, your writing is perfect in my eyes and if you could improve upon something that is supposedly perfect, than it isn't perfect at all. It probably just sounds like I'm trying to be nice, but that's not the case. That is really how I feel about your writing and how I view it. I have no doubt in my mind that something heart stoppingly shocking or incredibly well thought out will happen, but that's not really improving, that's more along the lines of surprising your readers and keeping them on their feet. I hope I didn't offend you in anyway. I tried not to word this is a way that'll seem hurtful or anything like that, but a lot of the things I say tend to get misinterpreted often. I'm sorry I couldn't be of any help though. The only thing I have to say is that it seems as if you like to expand on the feelings and thoughts of a character to create more understanding among readers. This is a really, really, really good thing in my opinion and is part of what fuels so much emotion in the reader. That expanding component is lacking in a lot in other stories, and just seems like it's dragging out, but here it is done expertly. It makes me wonder how you could write so well. Anyway, I'm going to leave another review about the actual story, and again I am so so sorry if I offended you in anyway.Author's response
Thank you sooooooooooooooooo much! Your reviews really do help me, they give me more confidence in my writing and half the stuff I write probably wouldn't be up here if it wasn't for peope like you (especially you) reviewing the crap I produce; so I offer you my sincerest gratitude.
Nothing about your review is offensive; it is really very uplifting to know that someone has actually taken the time to leave such an in-depth review about something that I wrote!
I'm relieved that you don't think that this is dragged out as that was one of my major concerns with this story; it is by far the longest thing I've ever written.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a helpful, detailed review; it really does mean a hell of a lot! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-17
I've said this before, but I'm going to say it again because it is the absolute truth. This is incredibly, unbelievably, terrically, wonderfully, excellently OUTSTANDING!!! Not just thus chapter, but all previous chapters, and all of your stories. I'm being one hundred percent honest when I say that. Seriously, no other author's writing could compare to yours. You are my favorite author and I believe that you will be considered one of those authors that writes stories that everybody reads. You'll be one of those famous fanfiction writers, and if you aren't I will be severely disappointed in the fanfiction world and will spread the word of your magnificent writing. Now, I said this would be about the story so I shall get on that right now. So, I really liked howAuthor's response
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!! I'm so soooo soooooo pleased/chuffed/honoured that you think so highly of my writing!! Thank you so much; you've put a huge grin on my face! :DFate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-17
Ugh!!! I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to press submit and I bet you're probably annoyed already, but I have to finish my previous review. As I was saying, I really liked how Gerard had to blame both Mikey
Yes, he loves Mikey, but how could Mikey even think about wanting to die? Clearly Gerard didn't do his job right. He didn't get it across that he loved Mikey, that the only reason he was alive is because Mikey is alive, that all the bad things people say about him were the complete opposite of the truth, but it was Mikey that didn't tell him what people said to make him so insecure and it was Mikey that didn't talk to Gerard when things got tough. That was such an interesting part and you get a further understanding of what Gerard feels about the while situation. Also, when Gerard was saying that if he just went with what he was thinking of doing before then all of that mess would've been avoided. He knew he should've been a brother. The brother before everything went up into flames, but he was convinced that Mikey needed a parent, that a parent was the best thing for him, and of course Gerard would give Mikey the best. All those people that told him Mikey needed a parent. It was their fault that Mikey was in the hospital. This part was interesting too because the reader never really sees why Gerard decided to act as a parent figure, but now you see why and all of this could've been easily avoided if Gerard just followed his heart. I also really liked the part when Frank just walked out of the door. I would be disgusted if i was Gerard too.That was a stupid move, but he couldn't have done anything else. Only he and Mikey know what happened when Mikey left school, and he didn't just leave so Gerard wouldn't know, he also left so Mikey wouldn't be so uncomfortable. Just walking straight out was stupid because he'd make Mikey believe that he hated him or something, but when Gerard was yelling at him and yelling how could you do that, he probably believed Gerard hated him too. There's a lot going on, but it's not in confusing and it's not a bad thing. Each part was so well written and beautiful and there was so much emotion in this chapter. I'll be waiting for the next part.Author's response
Don't worry about it and don't ever think that you're annoying; if anything I feel blessed that you've taken the time to write a third review after leaving two lovely, detailed reviews previously. It couldn't be less annoying if it tried; I can assure you that it's quite the opposite! :)
Your interpritation of this chapter, as always, is spot on. I always love reading your take on things; it seems to help me think the story through and even opens up new possibilities as to what I could do next. So thanks for including your interpritation; it's really refreshing and helpful to hear what you think about the events of the chapter!
I'm really pleased that you liked it; I know that the chapters are getting a little shorter lately, so I wad kinda worried that they had gotten worse in both quality and quantity, so it's a real relief to know that you liked it!
Thank so very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review, I know I say this every time, but please know that I really do mean it; thank you very much! :)
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