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Like Two Puzzle Pieces
14 reviews"With a home like this it’s no wonder that he’s so shy." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
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Perfectly Imperfect
(#) mom2masonandcole 2011-12-30
This entry made my cry....it was just so sad and moving and honest. Amazing job!Author's response
I'm so sorry that it made you cry, it was never my intention to make people sad!
Thank you very much; I'm glad that you think this is alright. Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-12-30
Really good chapter. I love how nice and supporting Pete is towards Mikey, and how they both love each other so much. It's beautiful and heartfelt and lovely. The description is amazing and your writing style is great. This chapter was lovely too, and I totally understand Pete's hatred for Gerard.
I also love the fluff in this chapter, and they fact that they're about to kiss:3Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm sooo pleased that you liked this chapter!
I wanted Pete to be the sort of person who can be really quite fierce, but only when he's protecting someone that he loves (Mikey) and towards that person he couldn't be any gentler and supportive.
I'm relieved that you think Pete's hatred for Gerard is understandable; I was kinda scared that it seemed out of character and too presumptuous.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review; you've made me smile! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) MCRmilify 2011-12-30
I'm melting. Oh my god. I'm almost crying.Author's response
Please dot cry! Or melt! ;DPerfectly Imperfect
(#) MCRmilify 2011-12-30
Woah way to cut off my review -_-
It was all long and happy too :/
Anyways, the first half was pretty much me crying over Pete and how amazing he is, then moving on to he and Mikey and how amazing they are together.
Crap I have to write this really fast errgh
Then me praising your writing skills.
And then me talking about how nervous but at the same time excited I am for Pete and Gerard to meet.
Sorry this review is crap, I can't wait for the next chapter!!Author's response
I'm glad that you think Pete and Mike go well together. I've never written a Pikey before (unless you count the prequel's epilogue) and I wasn't sure if I was doing an alright job, so it's a relief to know that you think they go well together!
Yeah, Pete is pretty much amazing.
Thank you very much for praising my writing skills. ;)
If I were Pete I'd be feeling extremely nervous about meeting Gerard...
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-30
...Oh My Gosh!!!!! This was amazing!! I loved it. I was reading the scene where Pete said Mikey was curled up into him like a tortoise and I kinda stopped my thoughts about how wonderful and sad and beautiful it was to imagine Mikey as a toroise and how cute it would be. I kinda wanted a picture.
Anyway, I really liked how the board was such an important focus in the beginning of the chapter. It was a really clever way to get Pete to learn more about Gerard and about what he feels for Pete. At first, I kinda thought that the ripped picture was something Gerard did maybe a while before and Mikey kept it there as a reminder that he wasn't a good brother and that Gerard is too good a brother for him. Too much overthinking I guess, but I liked that that wasn't the case because Mikey doesn't deserve all the stuff that Gerard says to him.
I'm practically shaking with happiness and shock and I don't even know. I also really liked how Mikey's room was something that Pete said is just something typical to him. Of course he'd have bass and band things all over his room, and of course his wall color matched him perfectly. It's such a sweet thing for Pete to to do. Also, Mikey just seems like he's really neat, almost too neat and organized, so that's how I imagined it. I just wanted to see that. I also really liked that Mikey was so open with Pete and that he's really starting to trust him. Pete has already learned so much about him just staying in that room. It's another thing that shows that Mikey really likes Pete. Also, I really liked that Pete had a little song for him. That was so sweet and cute. They have these little things that make them seem like a couple and are really small, but are also really special. The fact that Mikey leaned forward first. That was such an important fact and its exactly what Pete wanted and it proves that Mikey is getting comfortable with him. Pete knows about Gerard and Mikey's mom and the fact that Mikey leaned forward first was pure proof that Mikey really trusts him. You have such a unique, original style of writing. Sometimes I may mistake a story to be by one author and it is really by another, but I would be able to know yours immediately. There's nothing like it. I really love your writing. By the way, I read those two Pikey fics. They were really great, and I especially liked the oneshot, but I LOVE the Pikey in this. It's so well written and beautiful and sad, not too sad though. I really liked this. Can't wait for more.Author's response
Thank you very much, I'm sooooo happy that you liked it!
Now that you mention it, I can kinda picture the Mikey in this as a tortoise. All curled up and timid and quiet. Is it weird that I can see Mikey as a tortoise? Oh well.
I'm really pleased that you liked the whole pin-board thing. I wanted there to be something for Pete, as well as the reader, to focus on and learn from; the pin-board was the only thing that I could really think of to do that. I wanted it to show how much Pete means to Mikey, even more than Gerard does because Pete's tab is overlapping a photo of Gerard and not the other way around. So I hope that that came across alright.
I really like your idea about the ripped photograph being torn by Gerard. That could still be a possiblity; Pete was just presuming those things about it so your idea could be spot-on. We'll never know...
With the room being like Mikey it was just a case of me not having any good and original way to describe the room, but I'm really pleased that you liked it and thought that it was sweet for Pete to think that way. I wanted to use that to make Pete seem like he really does understand and love Mikey and that he cares enough about Mikey to analyse his room like that.
I kinda like the song thing too, I know I shouldn't say that, I wanted to make them seem kinda couply and close so I inserted the stuff about the song. I'm glad that you thought it was cute, that's the sort of feeling I wanted it to give off so it's good to know that you thought of it like that.
Thank you soooooo much; you really are too lovely about my writing and it just makes me feel so happy to read such kind things about the crap I write. Thank you very much for always being so friendly and complementary in your reviews; it means sooo much to me!
I'm pleased that you checked out those Pikeys; the oneshot is one of my absolute favorite stories on here.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a kind and detailed review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) asialovesrevenge 2011-12-30
Beautiful, as usual! You're a really excellent writer, this story is magnificent. Why isn't Gerard realizing that Mikey needs him? It's so sad! And poor Mikey, he's still not confident about his awesomeness! At least Pete is there to help him. This is so amazing, can't wait for more :DAuthor's response
Thank you very much; it's really lovely to hear such nice things about the crap that I write! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) asialovesrevenge 2011-12-30
I just noticed the name of this chapter, it's so perfect! Pete and Mikey, they're each others puzzle pieces xD Sooooooooo awesome. I love this story :3Author's response
I'm soooooo pleased that you liked the chapter title! It was originally going to be called 'Don't Let Go', but I thoughtthis kinda fitted better? I deffinitely agree with you about them being each other's puzzle pieces; they complete each other. God I sound cliched.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave two reviews! :)
I'm soooooo pleased that you liked the chapter title! It was originally going to be called 'Don't Let Go', but I thoughtthis kinda fitted better? I deffinitely agree with you about them being each other's puzzle pieces; they complete each other. God I sound cliched.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave two reviews! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) dropthedaggerlaura 2011-12-30
Awww this is so amazing!!! It's even better than the first which I thought would be impossible!!!
Love from Amanda (Lauren)Author's response
Aww, thank you very much! You've got me grinning like a nutter, which is quite an achievment considering I'm meant to be writing my English essay homework right now... :/
Thank you for taking the time to review! :)
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