(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2011-12-31The italics things made sense to me from the beginning XD good job XD
Author's responseThat's good, I just got worried in case people were like 'wtf is that bitch doing, confusing us all with her shitty writing' but if you already understood then phew, I'm glad. Thank you for reviewing!
(#) upinflames 2011-12-31Pffftt - you're not a bitch. Trust me. I was a bit depressed that Frank is gone. A little pissed at him for leaving too. But it's going to get worse before it gets better, am I right? Update when you can, oh, and happy new year! 2012, BABY; WE GONNA DIE! Lol. Okay. Well...
Author's responseThat is correct! Although, I think I'm gonna make it better soon because I don't like Frank and Gerard apart, nu-uhh! Who knows? The world might actually end..... Thanks for reviewing!
(#) we-redamnedafterall 2012-01-01I missed out on reviewing Chapter 11 because I was ... Actually, don't know where I was. Been asleep since then. BUT I shall say now that it was amazing, as per! If not slighty upsetting ): Frankie shouldn't have left. He needs to come back. But obviously I'm cool with whatever you have planned because, y'know it's your story and you know what you're doing. It'll be brilliant!
Now for this chapter.
I love and hate, at the same time, reading these Gerard bits (y'know what I mean? Like the flashback/nightmare ones? :| Don't know if I make sense~). I love them because it's great to find out why he is how he is, like not being able to sleep and things but I hate them at the same time because it makes me feel so bad for him ): I just wanna jump into this story and hug him! Also, I understood the italics bit from the beginning too. You seemed to make it pretty clear to me :')
I dread to think how long this review is gonna be when I submit but I think that if I take longer to write a review and actually think about what it is I'm reviewing you might appreciate it more and understand that I love this if not only half as much as you do.
Damn, and you say you babble? :L
Think I'm done. Just gonna say Happy New Year! :') and keep writing and update! ;') xoxo
Author's responseHe does need to come and he will soon! i'm trying my best not to make this predictable and like every other high school Frerard there is, although I don't think I'm doing a good job. Le deep sigh.
I totally understand the love/hate thing you have with the Gerard bits, although I find writing in Gerard's perspective easier than Frank's, it doesn't mean I don't find them difficult and upsetting, so yeah, i understand!
I'm so glad you understood the italics bit, I was so worried in case I had confused people and I found it difficult explaining how it worked and such but yeah, it's good that you have understood from the beginning!
I appreciate every review I get, whether they'd be long or just a few words, I appreciate them all the same.
~Long reviews like your one though are really great because I like to know in depth what you think of each chapter and the story altogether. They really are great.~
I have grown to love this story so much and I hope I am pleasing my readers, if I'm not then I would like to know where I am going wrong and such.
I can go on and on foreverrrrrr so I'm gonna cut it here!
Happy New Year to you too! I will, don't you worry. Thank you so much for this review, made my day!xoxo
- Frank come baack! bloody hell, Gerard is missing Frank and no doubt Frank is missing Gerard, one of the needs to get some balls and at least talk to the other :L
I love reading the dream bits, and seeing how it affects him and why he's so scared and stuff. although of course it's sad to read, and I feel sorry for him alot. Poor Gerard ):
this review is long for me :L
well HAPPY NEW YEAR! and lets hope we don't die.
update soon!! xo
Author's responseLong reviews make me happy.
I promise, one way or another (I haven't thought of a way yet for them to reunite and be friends again) but I promise, they will be friends soon. Trust me.
I'm glad you like them, I wasn't sure if I wanted to put more in put I decided that it's the only way you'll understand if I put them so I put one in!
Happy New Year to you too! And I hope so too!
I will, thanks for reviewing xo
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