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Perfectly Imperfect
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-01-13
Sadoradle. So very sadorable. Poor starving mikey:( just makes me wanna hug him until he cant breathe. Please tell me that gerard isnt going to be totally off his arse when frank finds him... Oh, now that will never leave my head! Until you update( hint hint)
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I'm glad that you found this sadorable, it's kinda what I was hoping for. Definitely poor Mikey, I wanna hug him too!
I'll update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-13
I just want to crawl up to Mikey, hug him, then call him my baby. I loved this chapter, it was really great, and I like how you made Frank make a decision about what he was gonna do so Gerard will come home. I actually hope to fucking god that Gerard is finally nice and understanding and stuff, or I will actually die. Amazing as usual. Update soon please! XAuthor's response
I quite want to hug Mikey too, he definitely needs it!
Thank you very much; I'm sooo glad that you liked this chapter! I'm glad that you liked how Frank made a decision, I was kinda worried that that part of the chapter didn't really work/fit, so it's great to hear that you liked it!
I'll update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-13
Oh, and I'm pretty sure there was more dialogue in this so well done in that. Err, I think that's all. Yep, I still love you, that hasn't changed. Okay, cool.Author's response
I did try to put more dialogue into this chapter, thank you very much for noticing; it really does mean a lot! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-13
So much suspense. I love this story so much it's crazy! I hope Frankie saves them. I really don't want Mikey to die. that would be so sad! :( This is so exciting. I can't wait to see what Frankie can do. I hope Gerard isn't drunk or something. I'm glad you picked option 2. Although I'm sure the first one would have been fantastic also. Keep it up. I really really love this storyAuthor's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you like this story!
I'm glad that you think this exciting, I was worried that this story is boring so it really is lovely to hear that you think it's actually exciting!
This is kind of a cross between option one and two, although it is largely option two; I kind of tweaked it because my original idea for option two was just too depressing for me to write.
Thank you ver much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review, it really does mean a lot! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-13
I love it I love it I love it! I just want to hug Mikey and squeeze all of the pain out of him. Its an amazing story...i cannot tell you how to write anything because I already know that I can't write anything! But amazing chapter I love it :)Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooooo pleased that you liked this!
I want to hug Mikey too, he definitely needs lots of hugging.
I'm sure that you can write; don't put yourself down!
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a sweet review, you've made me smile! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-13
I love it I love it I love it! I just want to hug Mikey and squeeze all of the pain out of him. Its an amazing story...i cannot tell you how to write anything because I already know that I can't write anything! But amazing chapter I love it :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) SyraStrange 2012-01-13
Yes Frankie, run to that bastard named Gerard. Wait, scratch that. FLY , fly to him and slap him until he realizes the huge fucking mess he made. It seems that everytime Gerard isn't there, things seem a tiny bit less tense. But Mikey does need him. Like he needs Pete and food. Yes, he needs food. I'm dying with excitement... PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE... I love you so much more everytime you do.... (Isn't it creepy how a stranger confesses their love for you? xD) Hope you had a good week! :DAuthor's response
I'm sure that if Frank could fly, in this case, he definitely would!
I'm glad that you can see that Mikey does need Gerard, I really wanted that to come across in this chapter so I'm pleased that you picked up on that. And yes, he absolutely does need food.
I'll update tonight.
I hope you had a good week too!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-13
You are such an amazing writer. This is one of my favorite chapters, it's so sweet and sad. But also kind of hopeful, so I like that too xD and now I'm worried about Gerard! But I'm sure Frankie will do something unbelievably awesome and they'll be fine :D I loveee it!Author's response
Aw, thank you sooooo much; it really is extremely uplifting to hear that you think I'm an alright writer! I myself don't really like half of the stuff that I write, so to hear something like that really has made my day!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-14
Oh god. The aftermath is just getting worse...
What I realised in this chapter, that I never really thought about before, is the Frank and Gerard relationship. Well obviously I've thought about while reading about it, but not detailed thoughts. I mean, Mikey is ridiculously strong. Pete is quite strong, maybe not brilliant at holding back, but Frank has to watch Gerard make all these horrible mistakes and live in the knowledge that he still loves someone who can say things that are that cruel. Every time Gerard fucks up, it's only Frank that can manage to bring him back to the reality of what he's done.
Which is why I really hope Frank can talk sense into Gerard. Mikey has given up and Pete just wants to be next to Mikey and comfort him.
Amazing chapter that, as you can see, really made me think! The cliffhanger ending again made me desperate for another chapter! And I think your dialogue was pretty good; it was realistic, I could imagine the situation and to be honest, it seemed to flow a he'll of a lot better than mine ever does.Author's response
With this chapter I really wanted to create a feeling of sympathy for Frank (amongst other things) because, although he is always the one who manages to stay relatively strong, always has to pick up the pieces of what his boyfriend does. Every time Gerard fucks up, Frank is the only person around to fix it and he has to live with the knowledge of what his boyfriend is capable of.
Thank you very much; I'm sooooo glad that you think this chapter was alright and that it made you think. I'm pleased that you think the dialogue was realistic, I have a tendencey to make what the characters say sound ridiculously out of character so it's a relief to know that you thought it was realistic. Don't talk yourself down; I love your writing and I'll be content if any of my chapters ever flow as well as yours do!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
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