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The Dead Don't Feel
6 reviews"Everybody dies and everybody gets left behind." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
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Guardian Ghost
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-18
Oh man I forgot staying up late meant two chapters in one day! This was amazing and so sad and I really hope Frank pulls himself together for the next chapter!Author's response
We can but hope...
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-18
I really like this chapter. It is beautifully written and even though I like a bit of dialogue I love this chapter because it's sort of just about Mikey's though rather than his current actions. I have no idea if I'm picking it up right but this is how I view it and I love it. It was quite a sad chapter but I really wanted this chapter to be from Mikey's point of view and to be sort of updated on what he's thinking and it was. His feelings were shown very strongly I think and it made it all the more emotional to read. I really enjoyed reading it so update when you can. You must be busy with exams and things so take your time!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you liked it! I was worried that it was boring and that the hardly any dialogue thing would kill it completely, so to hear that you liked it really does mean a lot.
From what I can tell, you're picking it up perfectly. It was mainly about his thoughts and feelings, although there was definitely one current action going on in this chapter.
I doubt that I'll update tonight, so the next chapter will probably be up on Friday.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-18
I love it. Amazing :) I love how it's just mikeys thoughts. Just magnificent! Please update when you can!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm sooooo glad that you liked it!
I'll probably update tomorrow.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review; you've made me smile! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-01-18
this is amazingly depressing! I love your writing-your stuff's always really creative and original. sorry i didn't review the last chapter, i was panicking about SOPA. stupid government, censoring the internet like whiny bitches...anyway, please update soon!
OXOAuthor's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you think this was alright!
Don't worry about not reviewing the last chapter, just that you'd take the time to review one chapter means the world to me. Also, sorry to sound stupid, but what is SOPA? My friends keep going on about it but I don't have a clue what it is.
Next update will probably be tomorrow (Friday).
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-18
Fantastic! This was such a good chapter, but poor Mikey D: Aw, I'm excited for more xDAuthor's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooooo pleased that you think this chapter was alright!
Yeah, poor Mikey.
Thank you for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-18
Perfect, as always. I really love how Mikey feels about the whole situation, because it is such a human way of coping, that it is easy to relate to, and that just makes the whole story so much more vivid and real. I really want to know how Frank is going to act around Mikey now, and how Mikey will retaliate. I love it:)Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you think this was alright!
I'm glad that you think Mikey's way of coping is easy to relate to, I thought that I'd messed that side of things up so to hear that you liked it is very nice to know!
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to review! :)
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