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The Battle
6 reviewsThey finally defeat Cronus. But something else is still lurking about (I RHYMED! I think...) Jay/Teresa/Neil Archie/Atlanta
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Unexpected Stars
(#) Demenior 2006-06-21
oh what a violent boy Archie is XDD Cronus is begging... I don't like it so I'll slam this rock into his head
There were some spelling errors here and there,a nd I think you might want to define 'slim readhead' as Theresa or Atlanta- since they're both redheads (-I- know who it is though) and I liked Odie-kins' smirk as he called Hera.
It's looking good so you'd better update soon!
~DemeniorAuthor's response
UUUrghf I'll work on it today. I tried to make it so that Atlanats SHORT and Theresas TALL. I hope they get that.Unexpected Stars
(#) Arisey 2006-06-21
Yay, another story from you! In my opinion, if it's by you, it'll have to be good. Wow...Archie's real violent.Author's response
sniff wow. I was seriously thinking of quitting this but for you, NO WAY! You seriously made my day. That is one of the nicest comments any one has given me. snuggles Thank you SOOOO much!
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