- oh what a violent boy Archie is XDD Cronus is begging... I don't like it so I'll slam this rock into his head
There were some spelling errors here and there,a nd I think you might want to define 'slim readhead' as Theresa or Atlanta- since they're both redheads (-I- know who it is though) and I liked Odie-kins' smirk as he called Hera.
It's looking good so you'd better update soon!
Author's responseUUUrghf I'll work on it today. I tried to make it so that Atlanats SHORT and Theresas TALL. I hope they get that.
- Yay, another story from you! In my opinion, if it's by you, it'll have to be good. Wow...Archie's real violent.
Author's responsesniff wow. I was seriously thinking of quitting this but for you, NO WAY! You seriously made my day. That is one of the nicest comments any one has given me. snuggles Thank you SOOOO much!
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