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Guardian Ghost
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-29
Amazing! Not crappy at all! I love it so much.Author's response
Aw, thank you very much! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-29
What?! This isn't crappy! I think it's a great chapter and even though it was little shorter than the others it really works because it sort of fills us in on Gerard's thoughts. I'm glad that Gerard is okay with Frank kissing Mikey. It would be awfulnif he got mad but I hope Frank doesn't take advantage of this! Take your time updating if you're busy but do continue this story please!Author's response
Thank you soooo much; I'm really relieved that you don't think that this is crappy! I do offer my sincerest apologies about the chapter length.
I did consider making Gerard not like that Frank loving Mikey, but then I thought that I made Gerard horrible enough in my last story and I just couldn't do it again. It won't stay all happy in camp Iero-Way for too long though...
I will definitely carry on with this story, but I doubt that the updates will be daily for a while.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-29
Too awesome! :D It was really great, I loved it. I love how the whole thing seems really happy and lovey and light then Gerard comes in and is all awesome and ghostly and protective XD Sorry, that was a sucky explanation. Super great chapter though, can't wait for more!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you liked it!
I couldn't help but make Gerard say that little bit at the end, I wanted him to come across as THE protective big brother.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2012-01-29
Absolutely amazing! I'm anxious to see what happens when others find out about Mikey and Frank! More soon??Author's response
Thank you very much!
The next chapter will hopefully be up soon.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-30
OH MA LORD, I'M SO SORRY I HAVEN'T REVIEWED THE PAST COUPLE OF CHAPTERS, I'VE BEEN SO FUCKING BUSY AND SHIT. But, they are all phenomenal, and I love all of them, and I think you are amazing and cool and awesome, and omg that kiss was just the cutest thing ever, asdfghjkl. Anyway, I'm back again, and I'm totally loving it. Frank is a babe. Gerard is just awesome.
Taa very much.Author's response
Don't worry about it; my whole 'update a day' policy kinda fell to shit, so I am extremely sorry for that.
Thank you very much! I'm sooooo pleased that you think the chapters are alright! I think that you're awesomely amazing, cool and amazingly awesome!
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-30
AHH I'VE MISSED YOU -glomps- amazing chapter not at all crappy it was uber cute and Gerard -looks pointidly at imagenary Gee- NOW you're happy with Mikey having a boyfriend -doesn't care that old Gee is from a different story- Loved it!Author's response
I'VE MISSED YOU TOO!!! Ahem... XD
Thank you soooo much; I'm sooooo glad that you think this chapter is okay, I know it wasn't great so I'm really relieved that you don't hate it! Yes, I think that old Gerard could learn a thing or two from this Gee.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-30
Gerard didn't get angry!!!!!!!!! Yes this was so great :) And if you are struggling with writing then I suggest taking your time. It takes me a ridiculous amount of time to write, but it gives me time to think it through and still get school work and things out the way. Just take your time and if you can't update every night then it really doesn't matter :) I can force myself to be patient xDAuthor's response
Thank you very much; I;m sooooo pleased that you think this is alright! And thanks for being so understanding with the whole updating thing. :)Guardian Ghost
(#) tortillachip 2012-01-30
This chapter was amazing! I'm not just saying it to be nice or whatever, it really is great. Now, about the length. Short, long, or medium, all the chapters left me wanting to know what happened next. Length isn't as important as quality, and I can assure you that when someone has your caliber of skill when writing, length does not mean a thing. All of your readers will take anything they can get. People need to live their lives and do other things, so it isn't that big of a deal. You shouldn't worry. Anyway, it was really nice to see that Gerard approves of Frank and Mikey. It is still indefinite as to whether Mikey and Frank are boyfriends or not, but Gerard is assuming they will be because Frank has really shown that he cares about Mikey. His opinion of Frank has really changed, but he still has a lot to be cautious of and can't fully trust him yet. He says "It’s amazing how much one person can change in the space of just twenty four hours." He could be saying that in disgust when they next go to school and he sees Frank not doing anything to help Mikey. Or he could be saying that in happiness when he sees Frank outright helping Mikey. Since Gerard knows what Frank's personality is like, he knows that there is possibly a chance that he will go back to what he acted like before. He also knows that Mikey is what Frank needs, and he heavily doubts that Frank will hurt Mikey again.
It was so cute to see Frank all blushy and smiley about kissing Mikey. They were so much like a couple in this chapter. It was so sweet that Gerard used his super awesome ghost talents to bring Frank and Mikey closer together, even if Mikey was asleep.
This was an amazing chapter! It was very cute and sweet, and it was very well written. It really showed how much Frank cares about Mikey and it has protective, caring, wonderful big brother Gerard, which I really, really like. This was a magnificent chapter and I really loved it. Also, this isn't really a tip or anything, but you could try listening to music to help you. Sometimes you can get really good inspiration and ideas from music.
I know some great ideas while listening to music and even from watching television. Think about how your story relates to the song or show, and if it doesn't, think about what from those things could work well in your story. And I completely agree with taking your time. I doubt my advice will be helpful, but I'm still going to say that I hope this helps. Great job!!!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooooo pleased that you think this chapter went alright.
What you said about length is very encouraging and I'm really grateful that you've taken the time to say something as lovely as what you've said in your review!
I was thinking about making Gerard hate the idea of Frank being with Mikey, but after the last story I wrote I really wanted to do it differently so I made him happy instead. He is still a little untrusting of Frank partly because he's seen Frank mistreat Mikey and partly because he's just an overprotective big brother even though he does doubt that Frank will hurt Mikey again.
I'm glad that you think they were like a couple in this chapter, I really wanted to put that idea across to show how much Frank really does care.
Thank you sooooooooo much! I wanted this chapter to convey how much they (Frank and Gerard) care about and want to protect Mikey, so I hope that came across.
Thank you very much for the tips; I will be sure to use them!
Thank you so very, very much for taking the time to leave such a kind, helpful and detailed review! :)
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