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Elegy For Some Dead Kid
3 reviews"Death’s a party and life’s a hospice." MCR inspired poem. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
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Elegy For Some Dead Kid
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-17
I really, really liked this, and I could totally tell you'd been listening to those songs while writing it...if that makes sense! :L Especially liked this verse:
Angels falling and sinners flying,
Too deaf to hear the living dying.
All clocks stopped and time bombs detonated,
The end needs to be celebrated.
You're so talented.
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
Thank you very much! It totally makes sense that you could tell about the songs, I was trying my hardest to let them influence me.
Thank you! :DElegy For Some Dead Kid
(#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-04-17
this is epic. no words needed. xkAuthor's response
Aw, thank you very much! :DElegy For Some Dead Kid
(#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-10-02
you know, after i first read this, i copied it to my notes. then i re-read it over and over again. then i wrote my favorite passages into my calender. then i showed it to my mother. to this day i still keep coming back to it.
why?
it's the best fucking poem i've ever read. words cannot describe my undying love for this :3
just thought i'd let you know
xo k
Author's response
Wow; you're review is quite possibly one of the nicest things anyone's ever said/typed to me! Thank you very, very much!
I'm really pleased that this is something you keep coming back to and that you like it!
Thanks for leaving such a lovely review; it really means a lot! :D :D :D
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