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The road to recovery. (Or so we think...)
(#) tortillachip 2012-04-25
This was great! I guess Mikey just has that charm about him that makes people want to help him. Or just makes people who aren't complete idiots want to help him. I thought it was really interesting to see Pete's thoughts about Mikey. It seems like he already cares and really does want to help, so it would be really intriguing to see how that plays out in later chapters. Well, great job!!!Author's response
Thank you! Mikey does have that likeable trait that makes people (i.e. Normal people!) want to be around him and the fact that he is oblivious to it makes him all the more cuter. I'm really glad that came through. Pete really does care about him already. He doesn't want him to get hurt by his friends. Pete will definitley have an effect on all of them and will mix things up! Thanks for reading and leaving a nice review! :)The road to recovery. (Or so we think...)
(#) Frankies_Hands 2012-04-25
Okay I'm fed up at this point, none of my reviews I posted the past few days are staying so hopefully this one will.
Anyway, I actually really like this story. I can see a conflict between Frank and Pete over Mikey in the future of this story. And I think it's cute how Pete already 'woo's' over Mikey. This story is just so... just Aaawwee!
-xoxoLAuthor's response
Thank you! I don't know what is wrong with the reviews but thanks all the same for trying! I'm glad you are enjoying this story. There will definitley be some conflict between the characters soon which will make things worse for the innocent party being Mikey! Pete is quite smitten over Mikey already but he knows it's too soon to make a move! Thank you for reading and leaving a really nice review! :)The road to recovery. (Or so we think...)
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-26
OOOOooooooooooOOOOOOOOO! Am I sensing a love triangle between Frank, Mikey and Pete?
Ahem. Moving on...
I loved how much Pete was able to piece together about Mikey just from paying attention to him, that shows that he really does care. I also thought that it was a nice touch that Mikey got beaten up; it was a clever way of showing us that Pete really is willing to help him out.
I can't wait to see what happens when Gerard and Frank a) see that Mikey got beaten up and b) meet Pete.
Great job and I look forward to more! :DAuthor's response
You might be onto something!!! But even I will have to figure it out too! Anyway, I'm really happy that you can see just how much Pete already cares for Mikey. I'm also quite relieved that you thought that Mikey getting beaten up was okay (not for Mikey I mean for the story!) I was afraid it was going too far but it just showed how the jocks will treat Mikey now. I also wanted Pete to see it Too so that you can how much he cares. I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter and I hope to have more up soon. Thank you very much for reading and even more for reviewing!!! :)
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