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Chapter Twenty Two
22 reviews'Everyone has a shell; it’s human, it’s safe. But it starts to get dangerous when you become the shell, and forget who once breathed inside...'
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Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) Kaida_R 2012-05-30
This is going to be a very short review, because I too cannot put the incredible ness of this into words! Seriously I feel like I'm reading a professional life diary or something - anyway I can't even begin to describe how I feel after reading this! I'm speechless Anne am sitting gee waiting to see what happens next! From all the incredible characters to the amazing emotion put into all of this... I am in awe.Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) MySuicideInSilence 2012-05-30
I can't put it into words what I'd like to say. Brilliant. Very simple. Agree with PrettyOddOwl that I can see the story going on in my head. Love it.Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) ChampionTeaDrinker 2012-05-31
this is such a good story... really. UPDATE SOON! ^.^Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) LydiaWay 2012-05-31
why do you always make me break down? i've cried WAY more than five times in this book and i NEED them to be together! it's KILLING me!!!!! it's seriously amazing though, i told you i thought it would be easier if you didn't over-describe and i've noticed you've struck the most perfect balance! you're so talented!! Love it!:D
well done!
Lydia oxoxoTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) amos222 2012-05-31
Woah. That was… how do I respond to that? Seriously, how does one pick apart anything about that chapter and try to give a name to it. How does one look at something like that objectively and discuss merits or faults of the writing or plot? I can't. Not even a bit. I feel bad because I can usually pick up at least two points that really stood out in particular, but everything stood out. I can't decide which of my favorite parts was the best. I love that Ocean sucks rocks, because I, frankly, dislike women in fanfictions. I hope she dTrying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) amos222 2012-05-31
Woah. That was… how do I respond to that? Seriously, how does one pick apart anything about that chapter and try to give a name to it. How does one look at something like that objectively and discuss merits or faults of the writing or plot? I can't. Not even a bit. I feel bad because I can usually pick up at least two points that really stood out in particular, but everything stood out. I can't decide which of my favorite parts was the best. I love that Ocean sucks rocks, because I, frankly, dislike women in fanfictions. I hope she doesn't come back. I loved the little monologue that Mikey gave to Frank about how his sexuality wouldn't change who he is. I loved every part where Frank was in defense of Gerard because he knows how Gerard feels and can relate. My heart shattered when Gerard basically said that Frank didn't matter, and I shed a tear when Frank found the hoodie. I can't remember if this is supposed to turn into a Frerard, but I can't see it happening myself, which either means it won't happen or there's a lot of the story left to be written, which makes me beyond happy. Thank you so, so, SO much for updating this and being beautiful and amazing and perfect and talented, and congratulations on getting a laptop!! I'm happy for you.Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) Mcrfreakytwat 2012-06-01
I cried. I'll just put that out there...
I don't understand how you can write like that!? It's beautiful!!!Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-06-02
...This is...amazing....Update please?Trying To Escape The Inevitable
(#) Meganisariot 2012-06-06
Wow... All I can say is wow. This is so amazing. I agree with all the other reviews. Your writing and metaphors are so amazing even if they are bleak and sad but it makes the whole story work and much better because of your writing skills. Well done! (: I'm sure the next chapter will be amazing and the rest of this story. xoAuthor's response
Thank you so much! :'D That means a lot...I'll update soon!
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