archie and herry are attacked
You might want to write a little longer, but overall it was good. Keep writing.
thanks, i'll do that
Good, everyone seemed on character. Ideas for the next chapter... hum, nope nothing.
awe...thankyou. i love reviews.
Really Really Funny They all have the right personaliys mind looking at my story Atlanta in TROBLE !!!!!!
oh gee [pretends whipes tear from eye] i'm loved!
"Uh huh, can't touch this" That was really funny. This story sounds interesting.
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