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• What about now?

  (#) StormVandal 2012-07-16

  omfg stories like this are seriously my vice, dude. I needed a fix of high school frerard.
  
  There were a few issues in the chapter with switching between first and third person, but overall I liked it a lot :)

  Author's response

  Thanks for pointing out the accidental switching between viewpoints, I fixed that problem! Please let me know if you see any more errors. (I wrote this in the middle of the night so there may be other stuff that I missed) Thanks again! :D

• What about now?

  (#) virgoxo 2012-07-16

  Ooohh gee lied! If he was gonna lie i wish it would of been a more believable one.

• What about now?

  (#) BulletproofNinja 2012-07-17

  Gee Y U LIE TO FRONKEH?!?! He loves you, just jump him! He won't mind!
  
  Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one :P
  
  ~BulletproofNinja xo

• What about now?

  (#) BleedingValentine 2012-07-17

  Cute! I can understand why Gee lied to Frank, I wouldn't want him discovering things like that xD Fuff is awesome!
  
  Anyway, it would be awesome if you made the chapters slightly bulkier, if you get what I mean? I don't specifically mean longer, I mean just a teensy bit of detail here and there, tiny bit more developed, etc.
  
  Then again, I'm a slut for intricate plots and twisted lines and agonizing detail (even if I'm not that good at writing it), you know, that sort of thing... but if this is one of your first fics, don't worry so much. It's just me :) Update soon?
  
  BleedingValentine xx

• What about now?

  (#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-07-17

  Eeeek! GEE Y U LIE TO FRANKIEEE?! Damn, this is good! And the DRAMA starts.. hehe.. please update son, this just... eeek, good.

• What about now?

  (#) XxSearchAndDestroyxX 2012-07-17

  Hai. That's an amazing story! C: update soon? XD

• What about now?

  (#) Hostile_Halo 2012-07-17

  update soon pwease? i loved it! it was totally cute!
  xox HHalo

• What about now?

  (#) SadisticLittleFucker 2012-07-17

  LOVE THE STORY

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