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I Shouldnt Love You
(#) KilljoyOnFire 2012-08-02
Poor Frankie...BAD GERARD. YOU DON'T TOUCH MY FRANKIE LIKE THAT. Unless it's consensual. Hehehe.
Great story, though. I want more.Author's response
Thanks :3
Thanks :3I Shouldnt Love You
(#) Chemical_Loverox 2012-08-02
strangly i like this story... is that bad? :/ nevermind, its not gonna make me like it any less..
Update soon (:Author's response
Thanks :bI Shouldnt Love You
(#) RockMusic 2012-08-02
I like it.... I think I may be a disturbed person. So .....how soon can you update?Author's response
Haha :p. Ill update by monday ;DI Shouldnt Love You
(#) -Dead 2012-08-02
I loved this. Well, as much as anyone can love reading about rape without making them just a little bit unhinged. Ehem. But yes, please update as soon as possible! :DAuthor's response
Haha thanks :bI Shouldnt Love You
(#) XxSearchAndDestroyxX 2012-08-02
Wow, I like =D
How old are they in the story?
xoxo
XxSearchAndDestroyxXAuthor's response
Thanks C:
In that chapter Frank was 10 and Gerard was 21 but for the rest of the story F is 16 and G is 27 :)I Shouldnt Love You
(#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-08-03
I like this.. I'm such a disturbed person. Before I give a REAL review I would just like to say -GAHHHHH Poor Frankie!! And BAD GERARD. HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO FRANKIE?! D:
Now for an actual review- I love love love love love this. I know, Im creepy and odd but hey, its good. How old are they?? I can't wait to see where this goes. I like story idea, the way you wrote the first chapter, everything. And Patrick being mentioned made my day becuase you never really see those characters together. Update soon?? xoAuthor's response
Thanks :3
In that chapter Frank was 10 and Gerard was 21, for the rest of the story Frank is 16 and Gerard is 27 ;DI Shouldnt Love You
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-08-03
Oh my god baby Frankie :O oh he is so small noooo
honestly I should have expected something like that after reading the description
I'm both disgusted and intreagued so I'll be watching to see just where you take this. The only thing I would suggest is more paragraph breaks, especially around the dialog. Other than that; awesome.Author's response
Thanks ;PI Shouldnt Love You
(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-08-06
I love this. I was like FUCK YOU GERARD! but I still love you XD
POOR FRANKIE D: No, meh, wah, gah!Author's response
Thanks :)
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