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About me
(#) Death_Herself 2013-07-20
Well hi there. Nice to meet you. Now for feedback, I know above ypu said you were in a hurry but I do recommend punctuation and grammar if you want to write things. (Just letting you know because there are people on this website that can be a little rude about it. I'm trying to be nice and so far I sound like a grandma.)
Again, nice meeting you.Author's response
Thanks alot! Yeah i know people can be rude and no you dont sound like a grandma i appreciate it i hope you enjoy my stories! Happy Reading!About me
(#) lolhai 2013-07-20
"If you have nothing positive to say then say nothing at all." So a reminder that grammar is important is negative? And ok, you were in a hurry. You can always go back and edit it. I'm pretty anal about grammar, but that's because I'm going to be an English teacher. But, I dunno, I thought I was rather polite. I didn't say "OMGZ U TTLY SUCK!!1!!". I also didn't copy and paste your entire story into a review and edit it there, which I have also done. So, really, before you think about posting something, think if you can handle negative reviews, because they happen to everyone. And yes, I'm being a bit of a bitch now because you were unnecesarily rude. I'm legally an adult. I'm in college, and I placed into advanced English classes. Wanna say something again?Author's response
"Whoa whoa whoa, punctuation and grammar hon." Really you weren't rude? and quite Frankly...har har...i don't give two shits if your an adult if you were someone i knew personally i would but since your not FUCK OFF.
And just so you know i have the maturity of a 26 year old and this is what happens when i get pissed i become a dick so stop posting on my shit and leave me alone. For all the rest of you im sorry you had to see this im not usually a dick but id appreciate it if you hated on me in a MATURE manner not"Whoa whoa whoa, punctuation and grammar hon." Thats just ridiculous Hon? Freaking really? And you can listen here bitch i can qualify for advanced college classes and pass so fuck off!!! No more comments on my page your giving me a bad rep i just wanna write and thats all bye
Sorry i didnt really mean that im having a bad day sorry if im a little cunt or whatever i didnt mean it
JUST EDITED "ABOUT ME" READ NOW ITS WAY BETTER!!!!About me
(#) Death_Herself 2013-08-05
Okay. I now officially know more about you so hi again (hehe... I'm a stalker.) The name is Jasmine but feel free to call me Jazzy or Wolfie. I'm thirteen and I am that weird ass hobo that lives across the street and steals soup.
Nice to (officially) internet meet you!About me
(#) lolhai 2013-08-06
Ok, I do kinda want to be your friend, however the "bitch" comment was uncalled for.
Anyway, new start yeah? I wasn't trying to be mean or condescending, rudeness just sets me off. I'm sorry.
Anyway. Hi, I'm Sam, I'm 19 and I'm a lesbian.Author's response
OH MY GOD HELL YES I HAVE A NEW GAY FRIEND!!!!! Sorry im the only gay person in my county so its hard for me...About me
(#) drfeelgood 2013-08-06
I hope you're not always rude to people you don't know when you're having a bad day. Internet behaviour says a lot about a person. Ignoring that, I'm Leslie. I'm gay and engaged.Author's response
Im not trust me i was being a dickAbout me
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2013-08-06
^ That's my brother. I'm Ryan. I'm also gay, except I'm married.Author's response
Dude thats awsome iv never met two gay brothers good for you guys!
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