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Chapter 43: Blast from the Past Arc: Mito: Part I
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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(#) Artanisrose 2013-08-12
I'm wondering what will happen with Anko. I kinda hope she doesn't walk or Naruto finds out that she's getting ready to walk.Eroninja
(#) TheCookieMonster77 2013-08-12
Ah, now I get it. I was wondering how you were going to bring Mito back. Ooh, I can't wait for the next update XDEroninja
(#) CurseKyubi 2013-08-12
This immortality thing does create a plot-hole of sorts because back in Chapter 21: Return to Wave: Haku
Kiyomi said "If you make this change and become like me should you die that’s it." which implies that they are mortal. This could be a case of immortality = eternal youth, but they can still be killed by normal means.Author's response
To me immortality and eternal youth are one and the same. They can still be killed via normal means but they aren't going to age.Eroninja
(#) Darksnider05 2013-08-12
That whole pregnancy thing seems like a bit of a cop out honestly it's kinda the same with Anko.
He could go talk to her and discuss their situation instead he's just running away from it.
Overpopulation is impossible for them to do the Earth can handle over a 100 billion humans needless to say I doubt the world of Naruto has any thing like that.
I can just down right say the whole have a baby means your going to age and die is bad it's just a cop out on your part and your better than that.
It seems like you've been drifting kinda left and right. Part of you dislikes Sasuke so you write him as a crazed loon instead of the guy who's whole life was based on a lie told to him by his home and brother along with his family.
:( Feel like your boxing yourself in with some of this stuff and Kiyumi is off making choices for people who are not her instead of discussing her unilateral decisions with everyone.
If you had said they'll discuss having children later down the road as their situation is fluid I could of bought that. But it sounds like your having them talk in absolutes.
I don't know man just seems like something you need to actually dedicate a chapter too or even just avoid if you don't wanna go there.
Author's response
Well that's your own opinion although I do admit that I find it a little amusing that someone is capable of extending another's life and they say the only cost to the gift is you can't have a child, but somehow they are the badguy.
You may be right about the current population. But I don't think Kiyomi would view things through the lense of right now. In this story she's already been alive for a couple of thousand years. She's seen the human population grow from a few scattered dwellings to massive cities. I think she would understand better than most that a growing population of people that does not age or die unless killed is unsastanible. Plus sometimes something has to be given up to gain something else.
Granted as you point out Kiyomi should have talked about it instead of just making the decision, but she's several thousand years old and most of her life she didn't need to discuss her decisions. That to me would be a tough habit to break.
In regards to your point about Sasuke, well let's see. He's defected from his village, attacked and nearly killed his teammate twice, killed his teacher who in turn killed the Hokage who he only knew as a kind old man, killed his brother, decides to burn Konoha to the ground, attacks and mutilates the Raikage and then upon meeting his resurrrected brother decides to annouce his desire to become Hokage to the people of the village that he abandoned. And you're saying I'm the one that has potrayed him as a crazed loon. Right...Eroninja
(#) TheWikedTruth 2013-08-12
Great chapter, one thing though, the situation with Anko, what's happens during BDSM play doesn't necessarily have to mirror life. Just because Anko may want to dominant Naruto during sex, it won't give her any real authority over him.
Can't wait for more.Eroninja
(#) TheShinobiGuardian 2013-08-12
I'm a little worried about the Anko situation and can't wait to see how Naruto fixes that and I just hope it doesn't get drawn out like the one that happened with Ino. I also can't wait to see Gyuuki's reaction when finally meeting Urd especially if/when she grows in power to match that of the Eight tails biju. I pretty much have an idea of how this Mito situation will play out and I'm sure there'll be a lil humor there when she meets Kiyomi and see's her face staring back at her even if its with a different hair cut and body, well there's always the story that she found her long lost twin I guess. P.S. How's the situation with Katsuya coming 'round cos I'm kinda curious to see how it plays out. Another great chapter Lemon Sage, can't wait for the next part and my sure TO BE favorite chapter of 'Target: Samui' :) (I'm so gonna love that chappie, I can feel it hehehe)Eroninja
(#) Mastercappy 2013-08-12
Great as always. Can't wait for the next update. And I hate this cliffhanger of an ending! Just so you know.
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