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• Eroninja

  (#) n0mster 2013-08-12

  Always great to see a new chapter, anyway your latest one garnered quite a bit of mixed feelings within me, as a whole it's great to see progress being made in Naruto's relationships as well as that between villages, but then again there's trouble looming in the harem and within the 'bijuu'.
  
  Regarding the first, I can definitely understand that you want to show that it isn't always smooth sailing within the harem and that there will probably continue to be friction before Naruto is able to smooth them out. Anko does seem to be a problem at present since she wants to explore her dominatrix role in a sexual situation, which as said before, would undermine Naruto's role as the central hub of his burgeoning harem and in opposition to Naruto's personal inclinations. I think a possible solution for this would be for Naruto and Anko to explore the BDSM which she's interested in, but with her in the submissive role instead, it wouldn't be unexpected for Anko to have a hidden masochistic side to her which reveals itself only to Naruto. That way she can work herself up and glorify in her sadism during her job, and then have Naruto 'punish'/reward her in private.
  
  As for the situation with the Bijuu, I hadn't expected anything sudden to emerge between Naruto and the newly freed members, but while I had expected some strife such as in the case of Mirajane, what Kukaku did was really disappointing. It was certainly interesting to see the varied personalities of the various incarnated bijuu and what not, and their interactions definitely open up even more possibilities in the future. Nonetheless, even the muted reactions of the bijuu toward Naruto (primarily that from the newly 'created' Urd) was promising and holds much potential.
  
  I liked the insight into Suna's leadership and their talk with Karin, it's certainly interesting to see the emergence of another village where Naruto and his allies hold sway in, having Pakura and Maki join the Suna Shinobi Council was fantastic and well-deserved and it definitely shows the progress of Naruto's ambition. This was contrasted with the situation with Iwa, Kumo and Kiri, where Naruto still holds little to no sway, he's had the most headway with Kumo, given that he has a few highly-placed allies, though certainly far from ideal.
  
  The scene with Mikoto was a little sad and I have to admit that I'd forgotten about Shisui's eye and its power, the conflicting feelings of Naruto and Mikoto does serve to ground the chapter and it really reveals the difficulties of avoiding the pit-falls of power. Hopefully Mikoto will choose what is right and that this event doesn't come back to bite Naruto in the ass.
  
  While I'm glad to see Guren enter stage, it was saddening to see her reduced to such a state such that she's willing to be used by Kabuto of all people in a desperate attempt to resurrect her 'child'. Still, seeing her changed mindset and how her newly minted approach to life mirrors that of Naruto (which really served to contrast against Kabuto's ruthless one), I've no doubt that Naruto would be want to bring her into his harem, both to buoy her up (after her attempt at resurrecting Yukimura failed) as well as in appreciation of her talents.
  
  It's also intriguing to have Mito as the antagonist next chapter, and I'm sure that she'll be another valuable addition to Naruto's harem. On another note, I'm quite apprehensive at the prospect of Asuma, Hayato and Dan appearing soon, hopefully they'll all be glad of/want their past lovers to move on, so won't brew up any hostile/negative feelings in the latter two and allowing Kurenai to move on in the former.
  
  As always, looking forward to your next update.

• Eroninja

  (#) n0mster 2013-08-12

  Oh ya forgot to mention that I felt that the whole pregnancy issue, that while foreshadowed, still made me feel a little disappointed. It's great that Tsunade's fears were unfounded and that she was simply reverting to the age where she felt she was at her prime, and while having an eternity with Naruto is fantastic, preventing the ones who wish to have children even if they had to watch them age was quite saddening. Then again, it's possible for Naruto and Kyuubi to change that 'clause' later and allow Naruto's harem their eternal youth while having the capability of child-birth.

• Eroninja

  (#) bakapervert 2013-08-12

  Thanks for the update. I hope you can kill Kabuto soon, the bastard is pretty infuriating.

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  (#) Vegito786 2013-08-12

  Another great chapter. kabuto wanting naruto to distance himself from Tsuande was quite funny to me considering he doesn't kno how close they really are. him resurrecting dan and hayate is rather interesting as well but i'm not really concerened as even if naruto brings them back to life i have to no doubt both tsunade and yuugao with stay with naruto. keep up the good work and i hope the next chapter combines both mito and guren :)

• Eroninja

  (#) Fanficreader71 2013-08-12

  Great chapter, I enjoyed reading your latest update and I will be looking forward to reading your next update.

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  (#) Tutenstein 2013-08-12

  Another awesome chapter. I just hope Naruto doesn't resurrect Mito in front of Kabuto and instead kicks his ass. Tsunade is going to be pretty pissed and Naruto is not going to be in a forgivable mood as Kabuto is the cause of distress to his loved ones.

• Eroninja

  (#) Vegito786 2013-08-12

  for the anko problem i would say if kurenai was to join naruto's harem that she allow anko to use the bdsm on her as an outlet since they are very close friends but seeing how you've planned it all out already we'll just have to wait and c how you go about fixing the problem

• Eroninja

  (#) chrishm 2013-08-12

  I hope everything goes alright with anko.

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  (#) theonetrueslacker 2013-08-12

  I'm going to wait for the ass kicking Kabuto is going to receive and I'm not going to smile like a madman while reading it nope not at all...

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  (#) xanthos 2013-08-12

  I hope Anko and Naruto work everything out, but if it requires Naruto being submissive I can understand why it won't work out.
  
  I was actually looking forward to Kukaku being a part of the group, but that was destroyed pretty quickly. If she's just gonna whore herself out whenever she has the opportunity she's going to be a massive disappointment.
  
  I'd almost prefer Kukaku stay unbound if she's just going to continue that behavior afterward.

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