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Affection and Genocide
(#) japulapu 2013-09-03
Right. So I need to review this entire story but just believe me when I say I love it. Also believe me when I say I am freezing my ass off in the airport lounge at an ungodly hour so I'll do the full review in a while. Right. Let me just say you are the god of plot twists man I totally didn't see that one coming wow. I mean, I expected a good plot twists because you picked a genre close to fantasy and you can really go wild with it and boy, did you go wild. I don't remember in which chapter but I remember that Avery had said that she found it difficult to admit that Frank may also feel the same way about her. I loved that so much. I find it so true and very very natural and it hit home quite hard. That was really beautifully written. For a few chapters now, there have been scattered grammatical errors, the ones that Word doesn't pick up. They weren't that bad and my only advice is to reread your work. I hate rereading my own work but it really helps sometimes. I also loved the chapter in which she tells Frank about how she becomes animal in nature when he touches her. I found that hilarious and sweet and awkward. I really like this story.Affection and Genocide
(#) japulapu 2013-09-03
Right. So I need to review this entire story but just believe me when I say I love it. Also believe me when I say I am freezing my ass off in the airport lounge at an ungodly hour so I'll do the full review in a while. Right. Let me just say you are the god of plot twists man I totally didn't see that one coming wow. I mean, I expected a good plot twists because you picked a genre close to fantasy and you can really go wild with it and boy, did you go wild. I don't remember in which chapter but I remember that Avery had said that she found it difficult to admit that Frank may also feel the same way about her. I loved that so much. I find it so true and very very natural and it hit home quite hard. That was really beautifully written. For a few chapters now, there have been scattered grammatical errors, the ones that Word doesn't pick up. They weren't that bad and my only advice is to reread your work. I hate rereading my own work but it really helps sometimes. I also loved the chapter in which she tells Frank about how she becomes animal in nature when he touches her. I found that hilarious and sweet and awkward. I really like this story.Author's response
I'm always so psyched about getting a review from you - they're always very helpful really makes me see the story from a reader's point of view, which is great!
I know I really have to get my act together when it comes to those spelling errors, and I promise to go through the chapters after the next update and fix them. My writing program doesn't even have spellcheck, and I really really dislike proof reading my writing. But I should. And I will. That's a promise.
Thank you so much, yet again, for the lovely review!Affection and Genocide
(#) CarcinoGeneticist 2013-09-03
Welp. I can't top Japulapu's review up there.
But I liked it too.
Author's response
I'm very happy to hear that. I'm sort of afraid to come back here in case you've lost your patience with me and have decided to kick my ass whenever I decide to show my face around here, but my life's been a total chaos for the past month and now that I'm back on my feet I decided to update my other story first. But I promise to start working on this one immediately! I'll be quick!Affection and Genocide
(#) alicelen 2013-09-04
This was good, but I think you kind of lost me at some points there. Maybe you did it on purpose? To confuse the readers by having the characters talk about things we are yet to have any idea of?
If that so, well that's just cool and I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's response
Iäm not sure I have the brain to actually do it on purpose, but now that you mentioned, it doesn't exactly do any harm either. Kinda fits the plan ;)Affection and Genocide
(#) MCRmilify 2013-09-10
Aw dude I've been reading this on my phone so sorry for the lack of reviews. This story is great! I actually tend to dislike vampire-y fics but this one has really turned me on to supernatural MCR fics. I love the direction it's going too oh god I can't wait for the next update and I'm really excited to see where this story ends up!Author's response
No worries, I'm super glad that you decided to review now!
I have like a love-hate-relationship with supernatual fics. They can be the worst, but also the best thing you can find. I have a bit mixed feelings about writing one, sometimes, but I'm glad you don't think it's all rubbish! I'll update real soon, my life has been a chaos for the past month and now that I finally found the time to write, I decided to update my other story first. I'll work on the update for this one from now on and hopefully I'll get it up soon!Affection and Genocide
(#) XbambibabezX 2013-09-14
One word Amazing, i loved it and can't wait to find out what happens ...
Author's response
Yay! Thank you so much. I'm ever so greatful for your reviews... I can't believe you're still sticking with me on this story, it's so cool to have you read and review! I promise to try and be quick with the update now that I'm back, I decided to update my other story first but I'll get to work with this one right about now and hopefully the chapter will be up soon!
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