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Hanabi tries to defend Hinata after her loss at the hand of Neji. IN rage Hiashi beats and disavow her. Naruto finds her in an alleyway and takes her in his care. Lemon, lolicon.
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Firecracker-chan
(#) ChaosDragon25 2016-10-06
I beg of you please continue this,but if you do please work on your spacing.Firecracker-chan
(#) timebreach 2017-01-01
I gust fond this site i read all of Eroninja witch you're right it doesn't compare to this ^_^. I just got done reading "The Lemon Sage Presents: The Promise", and i see someone taking shit about his work. I think "maybe if the is good at articulating his story it maybe worth my time". find this thing. I don't know how to make heads or tells (I know I spelled tails wrong I gust tiped it the same way as this shit head did) of this ......amm masterpiece that truly shows how one skill and devotion go into your work. After being the first paragraph over, and over, and over, and over, and over again, I realized 2 things.
1) I'm not going to get far in this with my dyslexia.
2) that I feel sorry for Jameis who you gave credit for the idea of this, too.
Now onto the reading of this crime against literature
By the time I read the first senate I noticed a few things missing, like a comma anywhere in the entire story. By the time I had to finished the first paragraph I decided that I should correct a few errors that I noticed, then see how it reads. Below is a DYSLEXIC trying to correct just some of the grimmer issues I had with reading, for added fun both this comment, and all alterations were made by the speech program that comes preinstalled to windows 10. I pray that if the author of this shit reads this comment. "copy and paste" the is below in place of the first four paragraphs. then light there head on fire take a chainsaw, and slowly in smallest increments they can muster, chop there arms off. dipping there dick in a vat of Aqua regia, after doing that jump in that vat and have it fastened shut.
The preliminary exams were over, and one month of time was given to participants for preparation for the next test. Naruto was smiling recalling how he happened to defeat that mutt, Kiba. But it was quickly replaced by a frown as he remembered Hinata’s defeat at the hands of Neji. How the boy had insulted her, called her weak and spineless.
Naruto may not have had much contact with Hinata, but he knew she was a sweet, and kind hearted girl. During the academy, she was the only one that didn’t make fun of his ambition. And now watching her on her deathbed by the hands of her own cousin made him furious.
He made a blood vow, that he would to avenge Hinata, by defeating that prick who just talked about “fate this, and fate that”. He will show him that he is the master of his own fate. that if means wining he would even do what the nine tails tells him.
Out of luck once again. Because, Kakashi has refused to train him as he was busy training the ‘prodigy’ Sasuke, instead handed him to that closet pervert Ebisu. How could he defeat Neji unless he had a good teacher? Thankfully he was saved by the toad sage who had knocked out Ebisu, and had promised to train him. all thanks to his Sexy-jutsu.
Firecracker-chan
(#) aqp23otaku 2018-04-27
A pity this wasn't continued with hinata joining and being happy with a new and really loving family.
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