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Firecracker-chan
34 reviewsHanabi tries to defend Hinata after her loss at the hand of Neji. IN rage Hiashi beats and disavow her. Naruto finds her in an alleyway and takes her in his care. Lemon, lolicon.
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(#) Akuma-Heika 2013-09-30
I like this stoy and plan to give a more through review soon. I would recommend raising the rating to NC-17 though and adding some other appropriate tags.Firecracker-chan
(#) Akuma-Heika 2013-09-30
Adding Hinata may be a good mix with how you spoke of her from Hanabi's and Naruto's viewpoints.Firecracker-chan
(#) randumbdave 2013-10-17
Please continue, but try to take it a bit slower and let the plot development seem less forced.
Hinata and Hanabi are an interesting dichotomy; Hinata has a very soft exterior which is wrapped around a core of steel, while Hanabi is much more outgoing, but has hidden insecurities. They're almost like two sides of the same coin.Firecracker-chan
(#) mike328599 2013-10-24
you should have hinata join and naruto knock them both up would love to see the clan elders face then lol
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