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• Second Fiddle

  (#) goofyball132 2006-08-16

  Great story so far, keep up the good work.
  In one of the later chapters (I can't remember which one) you mentioned that Ollivander's dissappeared? or was it Harry dissappearing into the wizarding world. and was the mystrious figure watching Harry home a DE or a new player? go H/Hr :)
  In a straight magical duel(no martial arts) Ron would have a better chance of beating Harry, simply because he has 5 years of using magic not a 100% chance just a better one.

  Author's response

  Thanks. Ollivander disappeared. The mysterious figure isn't a DE but could be a new player. Well said.

• Second Fiddle

  (#) bumble 2006-10-02

  I really like the story you have written so far,i haven't read a fanfic that has come from this kind of direction before.Im looking forward to your next update, so plz hurry before the suspence kills me

  Author's response

  Thanks. Sorry to keep you waiting. I'm still tweaking the next chapters. :)

• Second Fiddle

  (#) bumble 2006-10-18

  great update and nice twist on things with the whole bones situation, cant wait to see how it turns out

  Author's response

  Thanks. Glad you like it. You may have to wait for Madam Bones' situation to unfold.

• Second Fiddle

  (#) bumble 2007-01-25

  hey great update we get a little bit more information but were stiil kept on edge, great. I really hope you make this a harryTonks fic i mean im allowed to hope right

  Author's response

  Thanks. There's a delay in the update. Harry/Tonks, I'll keep it in mind.

• Second Fiddle

  (#) aya_celestial 2007-08-26

  I just started reading this story and when I started, I couldn't stop. This is definitely one of the best fiction I've read. You keep your readers wanting to find out what happens next. It's refreshing side to the Harry Potter story, so keep writing. I can't wait for more.

  Author's response

  Thanks. I'm glad you like my story. I'm already writing the next chapters.

• Second Fiddle

  (#) ankit_2415 2007-10-05

  AWESOME !!!!!
  A very orignal and intruiging story
  waiting for you to update impatiently.
  PLEASE donot stop at this point do continue

  Author's response

  Thanks. I can't stop now. The story is almost at the conclusion.

• Second Fiddle

  (#) robfletch 2007-10-09

  This is a fun story to read.
  
  I like how you turned most things on there head with the storylines.
  
  I carn't wait for you to add more chapters to this story.
  
  I like how you made Harry a thinker and Nevel a wineer.

  Author's response

  Thanks. I'm still working on the next chapters.

• Second Fiddle

  (#) Terdwilicker 2007-11-19

  Interesting story. Needs a bit of editing, mainly for spelling/word-choice errors. You sometimes use singular words for plural and vice-versa, and many of your idioms... are wrong. Please get a Beta reader to go over your story, chapter by chapter, and fix all the problems. There's at least one per page of every chapter. Its distracting from otherwise good storytelling.

  Author's response

  Bad word editor, bad.

• Second Fiddle

  (#) Mikaiyawa 2008-06-11

  I'm liking the story line, finding a few bobbles in word use (mostly tenses, which I'm dreadful with myself) but the plot works well enough for me to skip over them without to much trouble. I am hoping the Harry and Neville can settle their differences as they are both on the same side. very much looking forward to the next update.

  Author's response

  Glad you like the story. I guess I trust my word editor too much.

• Second Fiddle

  (#) termineter 2015-08-28

  Please continue this story, it has so much potention.
  

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