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Chapter 50: Trouble in Sand and The Pack: Part IV
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Eroninja.
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Eroninja
(#) thegreatbubbaj 2013-12-23
Hello there my good sir, I just recently rediscovered this fine piece of work and I cannot properly express my gratitude at you continuing such a fine piece, even with the multitude of setbacks experienced. I quite enjoyed the chapter, but I must ask if this signifies the scraping of Kiba's harem? Personally I had no trouble with him obtaining one, as you said it was likely him and Naruto would eventually get along well. Even if he were to, er, 'recruit' a woman that would be vital to The Dream, she would likely help out anyways.
At any rate, I quite like Kabuto in this, as he is the kind of greasy opponent needed to keep things from remaining all rainbows and sunshine. I also feel as though he would be the kind who would act as though him and Naruto are the best of friends when meeting, if for nothing other than to annoy him. Should this story ever draw to a close (hopefully not anytime soon), I could see him thinking of himself as a hero in his own right, finding great entertainment in messing with Naruto every few decades in the resultant peace of the nations. Either that or be the pesky enemy that never goes away and remains a legitamate threat that helps speed along the final peace. Or perhaps I am wrongly commending him, he is a slimy one after all.
I wonder, as I fell out of touch with the manga when things started contradicting the basic rules set down at the start of things, can the Revivals recover from something like what was done to them here here? Something like Gaara's sand but on a much more powerful and continuous scale...hm. As a side thought, Hidan must be rolling in his grave at how wildly irrelevant his God's greatest gift has become, they are pretty much handing immortality out now. Well, to the villains.
All the horrible things that Kabuto is now capable of...though, I don't see him likely to properly revive anyone when they are more useful as easily controlled immortal puppets. Orochimaru perhaps? That woman that was his mother at the orphanage?
At any rate, looking forward to your next update. Should you wish to respond, I am afraid I have yet to figure out this site's messaging system, or even if it has one. Although I am still active on fanfiction, soon to get off my lazy ass and put out a story even! though soon is relative...well, enough of my self important trivialities, farewell my fine fellow!Eroninja
(#) speedingticket280 2013-12-23
I'm guessing Yuffie isn't going to like what she sees when she returns home, or something and Aerith is going to miss Kiba, or something and they return to Konoha and THEN starts Kiba's little harem...or you scrapped it completely. Whichever. I only really had a prob with having to read about the details of Kiba and his harem more than the fact he had one; also that he had Aerith.
Question, was Naruto still in Sage mode before Karura attacked? If so, how did he not sense her? How did she get an attack? His reflexes are beyond her capabilities while he's in that modeEroninja
(#) chachu 2013-12-23
Really loved this chapter...good resolution to the Gaara problem, also happy that he finally got it on with Sari.
I am wondering if you are going to have Naruto revive Nono...Kabuto would be pretty upset at his mother figure being screwed by naruto.
Rather interested to see where you are taking Kiba in this, will Aeris and Yuffie find that the world has changed too much like Brooks(shawshank redemption).
Keep up the good work.Eroninja
(#) helel0 2013-12-23
A very fitting and enjoyable conclusion to this arc. The chapter itself was great, but the little omakes were the icing on the cake.
Happy to see Naruto's new move, but now i can't help wondering about the possible uses and effectiveness if he makes multiple imploding clones.
I was kinda hoping for more direct contact between Naruto and Senjumaru, but it's nice to see she isn't such a cold hearted woman.
The fight with the kaazekages was great and helped show how strong Naruto is becoming since he fought evenly with two resurrected kage class shinobi without even using the kyuubi's chakra.
Happy to see Yukata and Sari sealing the deal and gaining happiness; cant wait to see sari's reaction to Naruto having a harem and who its members are.
I'm also liking how Kabuto is turning out as an antagonist.
Looking forward to what happens with Karura in Konoha.
Also the inclusion of Quistis from FFVIII was a happy surprise; I wonder if Selphie might make an appearance as one of the other Suna kunoichi that visited the ghost.
The idea of sending Aeris and Yuffie back to Taki is interesting and I hope will show them what they really want and shows Kiba's growing maturity in letting Aeris go.
Finally congratulations on reaching the 50th chapter in a great story and as always looking forward to the next chapter!Eroninja
(#) xxconfusionxsucksxx 2013-12-23
thanks for an early gift update for xmas..i really enjoy the omake..so good to know that there are also waiting room for the non harem that wants to join Naruto also..i didn't expect for an update early but really wish to have one and you gave us a story that we really enjoy..now that the this arc has ended and a new one's gonna start now..i'm really excited and looking forward to it..i think it's also quite good if nono appear and become one of Naruto's harem to despite Kabuto..Natsumi of the Star village is also quite appealing to be included to the harem but she's already dead..just want to say..haha..mmm..enjoy xmas and have a good break but dont stop to entertain us on this story of yours that we quite fond of reading and enjoying every chapter..
on the chapter again..it's great about the event happened..and Kabuto stir annoyance to me..but he made a good villain here that makes you want to squeeze him to death just like obito..hahaha..
again..it's nice reading and happy 50th successful chapter..Eroninja
(#) Fanficreader71 2013-12-23
Great chapter, I enjoyed reading your latest update and I will be looking forward to reading your next update.Eroninja
(#) LeafRanger5 2013-12-23
Well I'm glad this drama and angst ended in a happy way. and I do hope that really, Anko's shit get's dealt with next chapter. I mean seriously, she was being a mega stupid idiot, and I hope Naruto deals with her.
Overall, nice chapter. The omakes were funny, and it was nice to see Sari and Gaara be together. I just really do hope you do spend some time just having Naruto go after some girls, rather then dealing with more problems like Kabuto and stuff.
keep it up!Eroninja
(#) The_caluba 2013-12-23
Brilliant chapter as always. I could start listing all that makes it brilliant but I'd probably never finish. I love the way your mind thinks... Jiraiya would be proud... and envious.
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