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Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Eroninja.
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Eroninja
(#) Narutothedevil-dnd 2014-05-29
To be honest the chapter was little boring but waiting for the next one.Eroninja
(#) firetemplar415 2014-05-29
okay...this chapter threw me for a loop....the 2nd to last scene(before the fuka feeling hot and bothered) about the cryptic scenes and events that happened....what was all of that about? premonition? future sight? power ranger powers??? im lost lol.Eroninja
(#) Tutenstein 2014-05-29
A kunai stab to the stomach and falling from a 50 story building kills Naruto? WTF? Didn't he survive a chidori to his chest? lolEroninja
(#) Tutenstein 2014-05-29
Why is Naruto getting pwned like a total noob? He got captured way too easily. If someone cuts off his head, he's toast. He has too many glaring weaknesses. Seals make him their bitch and it looks like his monstrous chakra has also deserted him when he needs it the most. How did Fuka even absorb all of it?Eroninja
(#) Europefan01 2014-05-29
Hola mi amingo, this chapter got me in the loop when Sora finally make his appearance and strategically took down Naruto afterwards, while Fuka begin to have second thoughts regarding the blue eyed blond warrior. Speaking of which, I hope Naruto can get out of the mess he's in, defeat Sora, save Hanagakure and bring Fuka to his family.
On the serious note, I love the fact when Anko finally got the chance to go with the flow on her BSDM persona and methods dealing with Haruna. Moreover, Kiba have learned a very important lesson when it comes to his clan's tradition, including losing severely to a bruiser like Koreshige. But at the end, I am proud to say that Tsume is very understanding towards her son's situation and impressed the he defended his girls honor like a true gentleman, despite of the disadvantage Kiba suffered from. Also, Hana and her pack returns to the battlefield with absolute determination, you go girl!
Afterall has been said and done, I' ve enjoyed this episode, even it gotten me worried about Haruna and her "condition" beginning to worsen a lot more than usual. Yet, Anko will find the way to emotionally fix her back no matter what it takes.
So keep up the excellent work like always, and update soon.
Until next time mi amingo.
Adios
P.S.: When in the bloody blue blazes you going to update the Birthday Bash episode on limelight hombre? I hope soon.
Eroninja
(#) FicWader 2014-05-29
Seems to me rather silly how easy it was to take down Naruto honestly. As you have Naruto portrayed as matured enough to think so deep on things that he read Chiriku correctly and even prompted praise from Kakashi I dont see your Naruto failing for a simple lie and leave his back unguarded enough that an enemy shinobi that he knows for 20sec is able to stick a syringe with drug into him. Not to mention he could instantly hiraishin away before the liquid could be even squeezed out, as he is faster or at least as fast as anyone he could end up facing, or he could hiraishin away before the drug put him down in those few seconds.
I just dont see Sora getting the drop on him realistically, more so when he suspected something since the conversation with Chiriku.Eroninja
(#) Incandescence 2014-05-29
Oh wow, so she sucked in his Chakra and is now under the effect of the Temptation's Touch? WHOOOPS! Also Naruto's chakra somehow revived her like it's done to Edo-Tensei people? Does that mean it's not the Kyuubi's Chakra but Naruto's that has that effect, or perhaps a combination of the two?!
Also poor Kushina, I feel for her : / It's gotta be tough.
The sora thing is a bit of a twist, it wasn't like that in canon was it? I haven't seen it but I don't think so. But it's believable, I mean, how many people who grow up surrounded by hate can overcome it? Not many... if we take Naruto as a Paragon, the pinnacle of morality somehow, then if you're normal you're not likely to come out like him. So Sora turned bad!
I wonder if he'll get the Naruto Talk like Gaara and turn good or if he's too far gone? He seems more controlled and thought out than Gaara did so I doubt it.
As always thank you for the effort you put into this and for the entertainment I've got out of it ^_^
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