(#) iheartyou07 2006-08-14I don't think anything is wrong with this chapter, I think it was great. Especially when Atlanta actually got into the bed with Archie, lol. Can't wait for you next chapter (hehe hope there's more JT fluff) great job!!
Author's responseThanks, I'm glad you liked it. I think I might have just been paranoid again, sometimes I'm weird that way and I go beyond being my own worst critique. Anyway, next chapter there might not be more JT fluff or too much anyway, since I'm thinking on a bit of JayxArchie arguments which Theresa might... not like. Anyways, thanks for reviewing and thanks for the compliment.
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-08-14Oh multi colored socks! Sorry i have had a lot of coffee, and even when i am not hyped up on caffiene i have a one track mind. Anyways great update. I love Archie tactict at the begging, just dont try to understand girls.
*Gummy Bears take keyboard*
Ok we have kicked princessofoyownworld off the computer cuz she is to hyper. We also love this update and hope you update soon.
Author's responselol yes, Multi-coloured socks--- more specifically, FUZZY multi-coloured socks. I normally actually say that to my friends, but I often forget to throw in fuzzy--- meh. Anyways, yeah, a guy trying to understand girls... is like girls trying to understand guys. It's just not possible, and when you start to think it is--- they throw in more confusion. Anyways, to the gummy bears, (Mmm gummy bears--- but don't worry, I won't eat you :) ) thanks, glad you like it and I'll try and update soon. Thanks for reviewing.
- Loved it as per usual. xD
When you were describing Archie with a dopey grin, I immediately thought about the first time he saw Aphrodite. You are very good at painting a picture with words, love.
Ohh, and to your review of my review of the last chapter, I'd think the sequel would be a good idea. That way you can say you completed one story, and start fresh with the sequel. 8D
Author's responseGlad you enjoyed it :)
Thanks, and although I haven't seen that episode, I saw the pictures over at the Director's blog and thought it looked HILARIOUS.
Yeah in my fanfiction history I've only ever finished one story, oops, my bad. I'm still working on like a grand total of... ten stories, I think? Most of them are at fanfiction.net since I haven't brought them all here yet, but all my CotT fanfiction are here.
Glad you like the sequel idea, I was thinking about it seriously and so I decided it would be a good idea but I wanted feedback on it first. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! I'll update soon :)
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