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What's Wrong With Atlanta?
9 reviewsFinally it's morning and Atlanta's still acting strange... Jay takes a more negative perspective on the idea, but Theresa thinks it's great--- until she learns that Archie heard Atlanta scream, yet...
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Arrows of Love
(#) iheartyou07 2006-08-14
I don't think anything is wrong with this chapter, I think it was great. Especially when Atlanta actually got into the bed with Archie, lol. Can't wait for you next chapter (hehe hope there's more JT fluff) great job!!Author's response
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I think I might have just been paranoid again, sometimes I'm weird that way and I go beyond being my own worst critique. Anyway, next chapter there might not be more JT fluff or too much anyway, since I'm thinking on a bit of JayxArchie arguments which Theresa might... not like. Anyways, thanks for reviewing and thanks for the compliment.Arrows of Love
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-08-14
Oh multi colored socks! Sorry i have had a lot of coffee, and even when i am not hyped up on caffiene i have a one track mind. Anyways great update. I love Archie tactict at the begging, just dont try to understand girls.
*Gummy Bears take keyboard*
Ok we have kicked princessofoyownworld off the computer cuz she is to hyper. We also love this update and hope you update soon.Author's response
lol yes, Multi-coloured socks--- more specifically, FUZZY multi-coloured socks. I normally actually say that to my friends, but I often forget to throw in fuzzy--- meh. Anyways, yeah, a guy trying to understand girls... is like girls trying to understand guys. It's just not possible, and when you start to think it is--- they throw in more confusion. Anyways, to the gummy bears, (Mmm gummy bears--- but don't worry, I won't eat you :) ) thanks, glad you like it and I'll try and update soon. Thanks for reviewing.Arrows of Love
(#) GrimCameron 2006-08-14
this story is great and I mean that in two ways: Awsome and Funny.
Please update soon!Author's response
Thanks, glad you like it. Anyway I'll try and update soon, hope the chapters keep being... good. Thanks for reviewing!Arrows of Love
(#) Mary-Lane 2006-08-14
Loved it as per usual. xD
When you were describing Archie with a dopey grin, I immediately thought about the first time he saw Aphrodite. You are very good at painting a picture with words, love.
Ohh, and to your review of my review of the last chapter, I'd think the sequel would be a good idea. That way you can say you completed one story, and start fresh with the sequel. 8DAuthor's response
Glad you enjoyed it :)
Thanks, and although I haven't seen that episode, I saw the pictures over at the Director's blog and thought it looked HILARIOUS.
Yeah in my fanfiction history I've only ever finished one story, oops, my bad. I'm still working on like a grand total of... ten stories, I think? Most of them are at fanfiction.net since I haven't brought them all here yet, but all my CotT fanfiction are here.
Glad you like the sequel idea, I was thinking about it seriously and so I decided it would be a good idea but I wanted feedback on it first. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! I'll update soon :)Arrows of Love
(#) caity_party_princess 2006-08-15
That was really cute and funny, please update soon!Author's response
I'll try and update ASAP, kk? Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
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