Categories > Cartoons > Delilah and Julius > Change A Heart
Dr Dismay's nephew, Eric, is in town. But he doesn't seem to want to live up to the family tradition.
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Change A Heart
(#) Jessi_Girl9 2006-09-05
OOooh, this sounds really good... ooh, you should make Eric really hott, so Delilah falls for him, and Julius is jealous and suspicious, but Delilah lacks on her missions and crap, so then Dr Dismay can steal the diamond, and then things pull together, Delilah dumps Eric 'cause he's a villain, and there's a big fluffy end scene! srry, lol, i'm writing your story for you... srry, but that was just kinda floating in my head after reading that chappy... ANYWAYS... that was great, lol, i loved the names... Mr. X Dismay... lol, please update soon!Author's response
That's a cool idea. I can work with some of that. And yes, for all you ppl, eric is hot.Change A Heart
(#) darks00 2006-09-05
WOW. Now this is what I call original. Good work, plz update soon!
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(#) Trinda 2006-09-05
Wow, I'm excited to see the kind of guy Eric is. Is he hot? Does he have the sexy spiky hair like his Uncle? That hair is so hawt :P
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