(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-10-15That was...well I can't scold you for killing people...look at my storys. But this was really really good!!! I would be crying, except I'm doing a science project with a really hot guy from my class and he thinks I'm typing up our report...well I am but I just got destracted. It was a very good story!!!
Author's responselmao. Sounds like you're having a fun science project! lol, yeah, procrastination is the best. Thanks for the review! Oh, and they won't stay dead, hehe.
- This story almost sounds like mind, with them dieing and all,
I know a lot of stories are based on them defeating Cornus and some of them dieing,
but something about this story reminded me of my own,
or maybe not maybe I'm just being werid like always. Sad, very sad but very good,
the writing style reminds me of my friend,
Ok that was random,
The saddest stories are often the best, and it shows in this story,
I don't think you should add to it, it's fine as it is and it wouldn't have the same emotionel value if it was continued. Keep writing I love your stories.
Author's responseoops, sorry if it sounds like yours, but honestly, I didn't think of anyone else's story while I was writting it... thanks for the review, glad you like my stories! That means alot hugs You're right about the emotional value thing... hm, not sure if I'll continue it then.. we'll see. Well, thanks again!!!
(#) story_master 2006-10-15that was really sad. But I liked it. I hope you do write more chapters or a sequel. This is definetly a favourite.:) And when you think about if they were to fight Cronus to the end it probably would end up the way you wrote, with only a few survivors. keep up the awsome work.^_^
Author's responseaww, thanks. I'm still debating whether or not to continue it... anyways, thanks for the awesome review!
(#) RavenChild 2006-10-16This actually is a good start...you should defiantly do an 'aftermath' series of chapters to see how the survivers deal with the loss of their friends.
Author's responseYeah, I think I'll have the sequel where they kind of have to deal with it for a while, until they can figure out how to bring them back. Thanks for the review!!
- This is a lovely, sad story. Well, sad isnt even skimming the surface I'd say! PLEASE write a sequel. But please don't take away any of the sorrow in this please. Sometimes, when I need to cry I turn to stories like these... although if there WAS a sequel, it'd be great relief after crying : >
Author's responsethank you! Reviews like yours means alot when I know people actually like it/it helps them in a way. I'm working on the sequel right now, and I assure you it's as sad as this one. lol. Thanks again!
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