- Ok sorry I've got to say this, I've been confused for awhile...so Delilah has cancer? Besides that, it's very good. "Darkish?" No, I wouldn't call it that. I'd call it emmotion. To me, that's the key plot into a story. You did VERY well with that. Don't apologize, I like it.
Author's responsedon't be sorry! if no one tells me I won't know!
you're right, without danger a story is well, nothing. and without emmotion we could write a police report, couldn't we?
thanks for reading!
(#) panda_1418 2006-10-26Cancer?? Aw man, that must suck. Plus the fact that I know a guy who was diagnosed when he was 14 (my age) and he says that the Recovery is ten times as hard as treatment!! Update soon!!
Author's responseuh, that must be really hard. What kind of cancer?
I wanted to use something else as "danger" for our dreamteam than "just" chips, posion and so on. cancer is a real problem nowadays and a very serious disease no one can feel safe from.
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