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Failure Is Not An Option
(#) Nautilus 2006-10-29
this is good, i would like to see the next move Voldy plays, he should probably make it look like he is happy that Harrry is out of Azakban.
I look forward to the chat with Moody and Harry. If Harry has not picked up any useful magic or skills in azakaban, then Moody is the best person to provide training.
Where is Harry going to go, Hogwarts, or possible Potter or Black Manor. I was thinking Black Manor. Have Sirius's will reading. And get Harry to move to the Manor (no not Grim-old place, but BLACK manor). This is probably where he can get the most training (light and dark magic).
That way Harry does not have to go to Hogwarts, until he has got some plans and some knowledge behind his belt. I don't see the point of Hogwarts anymore. But i am sure that harry will be pushed that way. What kind of support (if any) will Hogwarts provide.
Any idea of a ship(s) for this story. Please no GINNY (bitch). Ron being as ass again. Hermione, (not as a ship), but as a friend i am still unsure. let us know will ya.
anyway, so far sooo good. Congrats and update soon. cheers.Author's response
There will be no H/Hr, Or H/g or Slash. No worries there. I am undecided on ships.
Unsure on Hogwarts. Thanks a lot.Failure Is Not An Option
(#) olafr 2006-10-30
I'm sure that some people like this story - but I'm afraid I don't.
My main complaint is that your characters appear to act without reason. We get no insight into their feelings or how and why they come to feel the way they do.
Also, it's very rushed. And the cliches have a cookie-cutter sameness that renders the story extremely difficult to enjoy.
Perhaps a little more thought and insight might redeem the story.Author's response
There cliche's are far and few between I think, I try to avoid them but it would impossible to write it without any. The only one is Ron, Hermione, Ginny testitefying, and I plan to put a different spin on it. I don't think I've seen a fic where Fudge free's Harry as a political move or where Dumbledore does nothing for better or worse.
I agree with the insight, as for why a character acts how they do, well except Harry I'm trying to keep them IC, feeling are really difficult for me to write and I am working on it so hopefully that should improve.
Thanks Alot for the Review, This is very welcome and appreciated, Flames are welcome as well even if I don't agree, I won't cry about it.
PM if you have anything to add and I hope you keep reading.Failure Is Not An Option
(#) killerlord 2006-10-30
greath fic update soonAuthor's response
Thanks a lot.
Please excuse my terrible typing in the above response...
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