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Not Looking
(#) Tawney 2006-11-06
For a minute there i was quite confused! Nice twist though, im liking that Olivia now has to have a deeper relationship with Patrick. Hope they have a happy ending! Love ya! XXAuthor's response
Thanks for the review, i just wanted throw everyone off the smecks.Not Looking
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-06
i should really get some sleep, because i am not comprehending anything. i have a feeling that olivia is keeping a secret from us. when is she going to reveal? and her and patrick are past the "just friends" phase, aren't they?
gah, i have been waiting for this update forever. thank youNot Looking
(#) sing4me09 2006-11-06
hmmmm...a bit confused...but intrigued at the same time...please write more soon...Not Looking
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-06
So you "lost the spark", eh? You gotta be kidding, woman... I´m a sucker for this new perspective.
Also, I wonder who she´s actually talking to. If this is God then I want to ask you if we can go on a date. (S. doesn´t have to know about it...) This is one of the best plot twists ever, plonk-mistress.
I´m so psyched to find out what happens next:
1) Will her and Patrick´s relationship change?
2) Does God actually listen to FOB?Author's response
Yeah but no-one gets it - I'm a bit bummed. Time will tell.
No it's not God. I've bitten the bullet and gone for something a little alternate universe style.
1) You'll have to wait,
2) I'm sure God does listen to FOB, they inspire a lot a people. NOt sure how he feels about the cussing though! lolNot Looking
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-07
"Something that you fixed, like you always do Corrected your actions in line with your purpose.." - now does this mean she had re-changed something that she changed before?
if you are saving this, i understand, but i just re-read and it makes perfect sense now.
bah, i love youAuthor's response
ah! I see how this has been read. She asked "What went wrong today?" by this response, he's telling her that it doesn't matter because it's fixed. He then explains that she always does do the right thing and corrects her actions, in line with her purpose. Hope this clarifies, I cocked up the grammar a bit, what's with the 'C' on corrected??? Such a dork!Not Looking
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-10
I know I'm a little late with the review and all, and I was going to wait until I read everything before offering praise...but seriously, Katy, WTF? Everything was just fine and dandy when BAM! You throw in some supernatural crap. I'm confused and my brain says 'ow.' I love that it's different, but I don't get it. I really don't. I should keep reading, shouldn't I?Not Looking
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-15
Holy crap! I'm thinking Dissociative Identity Disorder (ok, maybe I didn't spell it correctly)? It was all normal then you slap in something confusing I have to reread to understand.
But if it IS multiple personality then that's pretty insane (HA!). I love it so far... and I need to read on...Not Looking
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-10
Thus far, I totally heart this story.
I am a little confused... is it some sort of deity? Is it an author/character conversation? Either way, I like it. I can relate to wanting to change a direction I took.
I can't wait to read the rest of this.
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