Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > Not Looking
Chapter 6 - Normal is Boring.9 reviews
Any confusion over the plot thus far? Ask me! I don't bite....well...maybe a little.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-07starts jumping up and down and points at Olivia WITCH! WITCH! BURN THE WITCH!
That´s quite an unexpected turn of events. Pour the plonk.
Author's responseNow now Alex....tsk!tsk!
(#) LOVELA 2006-11-07I'm not confused...completely. This chapter explained more, so I'm catching on!
(#) sing4me09 2006-11-07Aw AW!!...that's hot...oh so hot...I love Patrick...somehow though my stories end up being Pete...I have to change that...soon!
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-07so i'm going to "itemized list" this one, because i have a lot to say...
a.) i feel like a douche because i was so confused when i read your last chapter. it makes complete and perfect sense now, and i have every intention of re-reading it.
b.) you are a fucking genius. what you are doing with this story is revolutionary. this plot line is like the Jay-Z of plot lines. jigga what?
c.) how did you come up with this? because if there is some magic imported purified water that i have to buy in order to be as original with my writing as you are with yours, then i am so there. seriously, hook me up…
Author's responseargh! I really needed this review, I was losing faith so quick in this story, you have no idea. :( This has encouraged me to keep going with it.
(#) Frenchie189 2006-11-07goodness, i love it..
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-10OK, OK, OK. I think I get it. Oliva can go back in time and relive moments and change the outcome. And she can't control when it happens...am I close?
My confusion aside, she and Patrick are just adorable. There relationship is so flawed that it's almost perfect. And Dirty is priceless. You write him so well.
(#) riaryder 2006-12-13Wow. Genius.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-15Okay, so I take back the DID comment. In MY head I'm screaming 'please don't back track' too!
Next chapter here I come...
Sign up to review this story.