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• Ignorance is Bliss

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-07

  this is my opinion...
  
  i don't see how you could end the story so soon without it feeling forced or rushed. i think there is a lot more that could be said, or expanded on. but you are writing it, so really i have no idea what you have planned.
  
  but i love this story and i'd hate to see it end, so i'm speaking on a completely objective level. what do i know? :)

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading this story and actually liking it. This originally started out as a one chapter, completely short story. If you just read the default chapter you can kind of see that. Thanks to readers like you, i did continue it.
  
  I don't like to drag my stories out through many chapters. I feel it loses a lot of substance sometimes, and you get detached from your original thoughts and ideas. I have already felt like i lost a lot in this story.
  
  I believe I have an acceptable, 'ending' at least to what i have written thus far. Although, if this story does get a lot of readers who appreciate it and demand more I am not opposed to writing a sequel.
  
  It solely depends on the readers and their reactions to this story.
  
  Thank you for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to know someone honestly respect and likes your story.

• Ignorance is Bliss

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-09

  I know it says "short" Joe story but please: GIVE ME MORE! I´ll give you a rating point that is supposed to stand for the whole story up to now.
  
  I love how this is totally different to most stories: The girl/ woman doesn´t want to be with him because she worries that their relationship will be really difficult. Let´s face it: That´s certainly true... So, I´ll stop rambling now and you get to writing a next chapter. :)

  Author's response

  I guess i must be ficwad naive, because i don't really know what the rating points are for. Although, even if you were to give my story a rating point, to me i would just rather you leave me a comment like you continuously have. That means everything to me. Thank you.
  
  I am writing the next chapter, which will most likely be the last chapter. If for some reason, this story obtains a few more readers who feel the way you do about it. Then i will make a sequel to this story.
  
  You will also understand the female characters POV, in the next chapter. I am tyring to make it "perfect" the only problem is, I am a perfectionalist and I dont believe it ever is perfect.
  
  Anywayy... Thank you for reading my story and reviewing!

• Ignorance is Bliss

  (#) xharlequingirl 2006-12-11

  Cherise reminds me of someone I know. Good friends always getting each other out of tough situations. I hope she comes up with something to fix this! Amazing. Simply and purely.

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