(#) panda_1418 2006-11-18Ursula is evil!!!!!!!!!!!!! She must die!! Geeze, I had that pain in your stomach when you're scared or shocked all throguh this chapter. Emmet, what do you see in her???
Author's responseapparently he's a masochist... and he's so stupid he needs a strong hand (don't you think? :D) and Ursula ... well, yes, she's not the friendliest person in the world - but she wants to help she only has ... let's say her own ways.
but okay, that's my point of view, you might feel different. I only hope I didn't cause permanent damage to your innards...
- Don't apologize us readers love long chapters! I agree with Panda- Poor De! And Ursula, what a biotch! Oh God, please continue soon! rates moving
Author's responsethank you so much! Ursula's definitely mean ... but there are people like that out there (and one meets them sooner or later)!
- "Hey there, Justus" This was what she called him. "I got a big nut for you to crack."
I dunno, something's wrong with that line but I'm yet to determine what it is. I'll get back to you on that.
Wow, that is certainly one way to get Delilah back in the game. GO DEE GO! She's funny when she's jelous ;D
Author's responsethank you, I'm always pleased about criticism. concerning the story: apathy is one of the worst things that can happen to you, be aware of that.
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