I blinked in shock at his sincere face and defeated expression. I don't really give many boys any chance with Atlanta, but because of the language barrier I couldn't even try to get to like him. In...
Loved it! It was well written and touching. Good job!
That was really good... and funny! You should write more with the French writing... or add more on that, whatever suits you. Good job!
Thanks. As for the French writing I don't know yet... I might try to add some more french in the futur.
Interesting concept, the heroes coming from different backgrounds. Great work!
Purple tomatoe? Tricking Archie with his French-ly ways? Oh, what a cool one-shot this is, and with a great aand origional point of view. Awesome job Nuuoa! I love it, the characterization was good, and using your own abilities/talents to help really improve your writing and make it realistic and believeable was great. Oh my dreams will be stange tonight, thanks a lot!
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it... now I'm afraid both of our dreams will be tainted. -Nuuoa
lool purple tomato i loved it
That makes my day.
Awwe, I loved that! Haha, tomate... poor Archie:P Well, it was really really good...
FUNNY!!!purple tomato... hehe. if you think you have weird dreams you should listen to my sisters!
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