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Chapter 5
10 reviewsPressing my eyelids back together I continued trying to remain calm. I could feel my whole body shaking.
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At Least He Makes Me Forget...
(#) skull_cheeks 2006-11-21
oh my lanta.
more pleaseeeee (:Author's response
Of course. What kind of person would I be if I ended it like THAT! :) (Haha, our smiles are mirror images...hehe...god, I'm bored.)At Least He Makes Me Forget...
(#) kristina1 2006-11-21
omg, please keep going!!!^_^Author's response
And going...At Least He Makes Me Forget...
(#) xoxTNTxox16 2006-11-21
OMG!
i love your story
please keep going!
thanks!At Least He Makes Me Forget...
(#) sing4me09 2006-11-24
ooh la la!!...haha Panic! Just came on as I startyed writing this!!!...I'm going to see them day after tomorrow!!...I really love your story!Author's response
Whoa! Craziness! It's a sigh. Haha. Just kidding...glad you like.At Least He Makes Me Forget...
(#) x-xJafax-x 2006-11-26
EEP !!!
Why must u torement us with cliff hangers ?! (i just noticed i used a long wrd !! lol) nehu loves it m'dear n cnt wait for mreAuthor's response
Thanx... but I like cliff hangers, so expect more? Maybe? We'll see.At Least He Makes Me Forget...
(#) Lillith_Thursday 2006-11-27
I can honestly say that was written a lot better than anything I've ever posted. I loved it. Please write more soon.At Least He Makes Me Forget...
(#) claire182 2006-11-27
Hey. I think that you are ding a great job with the story. The only thing that I would add, maybe it's just me, but i think that it shouldn't be just like the girl meets boy, they fall in love and live happi;y ever after. You should make it a little harder for Raquel. But like I said, maybe it's just me. You're doing a great job with it thoughAuthor's response
It's only the beginning...but of course the ending will be oh-so-nice-and-fluffy but I don't my whole story to be that way. I'll mix it up. Just gotta sit down at my laptop and type it out. And thank you for saying that it should be harder for Raquel. Hey, at least your honest about it. I have no problem with criticism...well, the good kind at least. :)At Least He Makes Me Forget...
(#) isuckatlifen 2007-01-21
damn i had an idea a few days ago to do a story similar to this chapter only with mikey way would you mind if i still did it? im not copying you i came up with it before i even read your story but i thought i should still ask permissionAuthor's response
Oh, I wouldn't mind. Not at all. No need to ask to use the same setting I used. If you do decide to write it, tell me. I'd luv to read it! ;)
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