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The Ends of the Story
59 reviewsThe Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, the end of the story.
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The Younger Potter Twin
(#) CrimsonEmperor 2010-02-22
It seemed that you really rushed the end.... There was a lot more potential for the story to extend I think. Oh well. It was fun while it lasted thanks.....The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Msgupy 2010-03-10
Wonderful. I only recently found this site and am piling through your stories. I was, yet again, really impressed. Thx.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) potterfanchuck 2010-10-02
Great story as are the rest of yours that I have read. I'm glad to see you're still writing fan fiction for Harry Potter.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) wildaboutharry 2013-01-13
Excellent story, absolutely one of the best. I have read this once before but it was just as addictive this time as it was the first time.
BTW one of the many perhaps minor things I appreciated about your story was that you did not turn Snape into a mono-dimensional evil character. He is, to me anyway, one of the most fascinatingly complex characters in canon, but so many fanfiction authors, in my experience mostly young male authors, hate and 'bash' him into a boring cardboard villain.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) NobleK 2013-08-30
AW! And I love how they teased Hermione about her quoting 'Hogwarts: A History' all the time!! :-DThe Younger Potter Twin
(#) sparky40sw 2014-11-14
I think that I have read every other piece that you have published under this name, and very much enjoyed most of them, but I had avoided this one, mainly due to the title and all of the "harry's twin brother got the call" trope that was prevalent a few years ago.
Now I am sorry I waited, I feel that this is one of your very best works, well developed characters, believable dialogue, very nice plotting, a real treasure. thank you for sharing your skills.Author's response
Thanks for the great review! I'm glad you enjoyed the storyThe Younger Potter Twin
(#) EdTheBeast 2019-08-31
This is a fantastic must read time travel. No incest. It is a very PG-13. Well done.Author's response
Glad you enjoyed it!The Younger Potter Twin
(#) EdTheBeast 2020-09-08
I have just re-read the story! It is a must read for anyone loving time travel stories. I will recommend reading it in my AO3 Reaper story!Author's response
Glad you enjoyed this old story; thanks!
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