- oh.. this was brilliant. what are you planning to do now.
Have you read "the girl who lived" by SilverAegis. i love that story. its a real pity that the author has given up on it...
if there is anyone, i would like to re-write the story, or post up their own version, it would be you. please do consider it, if you haven't read the story, i recommend you do, its simply brilliant, though i am sure there are factors that you could add to it...
i really hope that you take it up, regardless, i hope to see another story up soon. congrats again, this has been a enjoyable read...
Author's responseThat is a good story, and it would have been nice if it were finished. I need to finish 'Re-Ordered' and then get to work on my non-fiction.
- All I can really say is that it ended too soon. I know you have other stories in process - since I'm reading them - but I can't help but think that this one deserved to be longer. Maybe build through their second year with a more climactic final fight over the summer. Have V make himself a silver arm or something.
It was one of your best works and a unique twist to the time-travel idea. Very well done.
PS How about a short epilogue showing the two sets of characters, James, Lily, Hermione, Luna, Remus and Tonks meeting up in the afterlife and discussing their lives and how long Harry has left to live?
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