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The Ends of the Story
59 reviewsThe Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, the end of the story.
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The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Toto 2006-12-07
finished, sigh.
I liked it.
No questions from hermione, uh?The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Jimm 2006-12-07
Good story. Not hugely romantic--personal relationships seem secondary to me in this one, but a very nice treatment of a rather original timetravel!Harry.
Hermione, Luna, Ron (Weasley) are all mentioned, even Dudley's around somewhere. I was surprised there's no mention of any one, except for Harry himself, who didn't exist because of the time line changes.
Many thanks for sharing this with us.Author's response
So who would really miss Draco if he never existed in the time-line? Only Harry would know who is 'missing'.
"T"The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Shaggy37 2006-12-07
BLOODY BRILLIANT STORY!!!! I can't wait to see what you do next!!!! DO keep up the outstanding work:):):):):):)The Younger Potter Twin
(#) pi3142 2006-12-07
Probably the best of you non-smut work - though I still have a soft spot for Transforming Harry on RS. Now if you could only get re-ordered finished with twice as much smut I will be a happy man... :pAuthor's response
No, I think 'Transforming Harry' will still top the list. 'Re-Ordered' should have a bit more depth.
"T"The Younger Potter Twin
(#) nfosurfer 2006-12-07
Thank you for being such a wonderfully prolific writer. I cant tell you how much I looked forward to chapter updates in my inbox from this story. Excelent job Doc,
ThanksThe Younger Potter Twin
(#) matthiasblack 2006-12-07
Well that was quite a nice story. I hope you turn your attentions elsewhere but I wouldn't fault you a short break from fanfiction. I will probably read whatever Harry Potter fic you start next and I'm sure it will be the same if not by pass the quality that you usually have.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Amadan 2006-12-07
Brillant story allthough I dont think it rated a R rating.Author's response
Except for Petunia's 'pin-money', it didn't. However, I'm fairly sure the mods at the 'other site' would have insisted on an R there because of that, so I was being consistant.
"T"The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-12-07
Nice ending. The death of Voldie was almost anti-climatic. I like how Hermione and Luna (and Tonks and Remus) were let into the story.
Nice wrap up. Thanks for writing. Anything else on the horizon to keep me from writing my own stories :-)
Tom A.
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