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The Ends of the Story
59 reviewsThe Heir of the Founders, the Heir of Merlin, needs to set the future straight -- by going back to 1971. In this chapter, the end of the story.
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The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Wolfric 2007-02-09
I really like this story. I think this one suits me the best of the time travelling super Harry stories I have read. I realize that it is all fairly subjective but that is how I see it. Thanks. WThe Younger Potter Twin
(#) Cateagle 2007-02-27
A truly delightful and enjoyable story. wicked chuekle A, probably twisted, part of me imagines either the Lunas or the Hermiones from the two time streams making contact (say in the "astral plane") sometime after 2010 and sharing information; that could get interesting, to say the least.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) SiriusStains 2007-03-13
This story was fantastic! honestly i don't even know where to begin..You blended so many cleche' plotbunnies and did them right...putting origional spins on most things. I really really really enjoyed this. I suppose my only bit of constructive critisism is the few spelling mistakes here and there, not nearly enough for me to stop reading but enough to notice. Mostly small mistakes like "to, two and Too"The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Goddessa39 2007-05-10
I liked this story a lot. Usually the Harry-goes-back-to-the-time-of-Lily freaks me out more than James being there because they make her fall for him or otherwise. But this one I liked a lot, especially with the Peter Pan references.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) xaoc 2007-08-24
It was amzing and intense and all together great. It's rare that I find fictions this great. For that I'm grateful to you for brightening my day with a the fact that there are still fan fiction writers with style.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) KylePK 2008-01-18
A well thought out plot, less harem bullshit, and the best ending I have seen in any of your works leads me to deem this your very best.
Keep up the good work and do try to remember that the constant, overly-done smut that lacks any variation is the bane of your work.The Younger Potter Twin
(#) Hahukum_Konn 2008-01-20
I really liked this fic. It has been one of the more imaginative and original time-travel fics I've seen, especially as Harry does not fall for Lily Evans, and manages to set things right during the first (and only) rise of Voldemort.
Too many Harry-goes-to-the-1970s fics use retreaded elements of Harry-needs-a-break-so-he-becomes-DADA-teacher and then half of them add the squick factor where he falls in love with Lily Evans.
Yours has been like a breath of fresh air and it's been making me wish more people wrote original time travel to the Marauder Era fic (Only EmySabath's "Time to Spare" gets close).
Good work :)
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