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• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) dennisud 2008-01-21

  I love your stories, they really hook you in and you want to keep reading til the end.
  
  The only critique is that fact that a few of the stories, including this one, builds up well but when the 'final' battle between Harry and Voldy-pants, its so abrupt and short.
  
  that needs to be worked on.
  
  dennisud

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Ruthful 2008-01-24

  Oh, very good. I liked it.
  
  I think Ellen and Harry's relationship was a bit rushed, but I suppose that wasn't the point of the story.
  
  Overall, I think you did a good job.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) wolf550e 2008-05-19

  Usually I'm not at all into the MWPP genre, but of the various AUs in this "series" of time traveling Harry, this is the best. Except that I still can't believe a thirty year old man can act as if he's twenty years younger, convincingly, for years. Even if you repress his hormones.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) BethAnn5572 2008-07-04

  I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
  
  
  Thank you,
  
  
  Terri

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-07-16

  Very good story. Really enjoyed reading it.
  
  gunny

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) keichan2 2008-12-25

  I really like the story, thank you!
  I had some doubts at the beginning, because, well... It was Harry Potter, but NOT Harry Potter, if you can see what I mean, but it turned out right and I enjoyed the story.
  

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) dennisud 2009-02-03

  Why I didn't read this before I don't know.
  Though I am a bit miffed with him not ending up with Luna and Hermione, its still kewl as they got his sons instead and I really like Ellen here and I enjoyed the pacing and gradual dismemberment of Fartyvolts and his Marry Men-whores made for good readings!
  
  Please next time allow the girls to come along for the ride!
  
  dennisud

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) Fyrecat 2009-05-20

  Great story. I have been reading my way up from the bottom of your page (except for 'to the rescue' because I had to read it before 'Tabitha', of course) and I must say, this is the best written so far! This story could use some editing for verb tense, missing articles and such, but overall an excellent piece of work.
  
  Thank you.

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) donroho89 2009-06-10

  This story was amazing! It was so detailed and the ending didn't leave me disappointed. The characters were very up to par and the plot was quite interesting in my opinion. Plus this is the longest review that I've written on ficwad to-date.
  
  -La Mort de Glace

• The Younger Potter Twin

  (#) momocolady 2009-06-22

  I like this story very much.
  bye
  momoko

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