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The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2006-12-15
I love this story so much! PLease update soon.. This made my day, I hate this cast :(Author's response
W, you have a cast? That sucks, I broke my arm once which was soooo not fun, but I'm glad I made your day. :) I'll try to update again if I can before I leave school.The Mistake
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-15
she's gonna be like: and that is bad news why? and then something bad is going to happen :[ aw patrick called her. how sweet. lol i am leaving sucky reviews today. i'm sorry. i'm kinda out of it... but i love it so update soon!Author's response
hey, any kind of review is a good review... unless you say 'that is the most horrible thing ever written, you should have your hands cut off to prevent anyone from having to read your stupid story'... because then that would be a bad review and I would probably cry.The Mistake
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-15
oh no!!!
oh geez! i hope wendy's ok!!
for real!!
i hate cliff hangers!!!
haha! update again soon!!The Mistake
(#) FallOutGrl 2006-12-15
Dude....im stunned.....i read this over and over and over and i am so excited and terrified and a whole lot of other emotions. This is an amazing story. Its turning out sooooo cool! I honeslty cant tell whats going to happen next and i want to so badly! pleeeeeeeeeeeease updtate soon! the suspense is killing me!Author's response
!!! I'm so glad you like it so much!!! :) I hope to have plenty of twists and turns to keep up the suspense for you all.The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-16
"Gosh." Matthew muttered. He never actually said the Lord's name in vein. He was a good, strong Christian boy raised in the South. -> I know you won’t mind me finding this amusing because you know I’m a dork at heart. ;)
Nice characterization of Matthew. Not too much but still portraying him neatly.
Wait a minute, mister. (Where did that mister come from?) Should I be suspicious of that Matthew dude… I think so… hm…
HA HA! Patrick “from the band”. I love ya. ;)
Patrick is so cute and tasty. I love ya more now.
Yup. This defnitely needs an “exciting” arpee (rating point). SO on the edge of mah seat rait nah.
I’m glad you’re having so much fun writing this because I’m having so much fun reading this. Now take your fun and produce another chapter. Pronto. Please?Author's response
Hmm, definately not a mister. I'm glad you find my story so amusing... and Patrick IS cute and tasty... anyway, I'm sitting at my home now (as opposed to my apartment at school) and I'm wondering how I'm going to get my story from my laptop to our main computer... hmm. Shall be a challenge, or maybe I should invest in a flashdrive. We shall see.;)The Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-17
NOTE TO AUTHOR, PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE YOUR READERS ACTUALLY SUSPENDED OVER THE CLIFF AT THE END OF YOUR STORIES. ONE DAY THEY MIGHT DIE.
UNLESS YOU CAN TIE ALL THE RATING POINTS TOGETHER TO MAKE A SAFE ROPE, BUT I'M THINKING NOT....
SO DON'T. BUT PLEASE KEEP DOING IT. BECAUSE IT'S VERY COOL.
THANK YOU
KATY HIBBERD.Author's response
Hmm, you might have a point there. What if I die? Then everyone will be left hanging. I already explained the entire thing to my sister, so maybe she'd at least post how it was supposed to end...The Mistake
(#) CoraLiz 2007-01-16
I keep getting a horrible feeling for the majority of this story. I keep feeling like something even more horrible is going to happen. So please be nice to us poor readers! I love Ava and this storyThe Mistake
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-11
"Um, it's Patrick." He said quickly. "You know, from the band..."
That is the best line on the face of the planet.
i love it.Author's response
Yay! I loved that line too for some reason. It felt very Patrick-like, even though I totally made him so much of a wimp at the first of my story. Kind-of regretting that now. lol. But I guess that's just the way these things work. I feel like I'm evolving faster than my story is.The Mistake
(#) ssketchator 2007-06-01
I'm calling you for the same reason any guy calls a girl. I can't pinpoint why, but I flipping luff that line. Something about it is just incredible.
Why is finding Wendy bad news?!?! NOOO!
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